Waterfall

standing beneath
the cold waterfall
my sins and the heat
swept from body and soul
by nature's baptism
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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July 22, 2013 at 9:11 AM
I like this, Francine! Great tanka! Love, Kim
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