Waterfall

Like a cloudburst,
a flux of cascading water,
a critical current,
a deluge,
like an effusion of bodily fluid,
but somewhat through the whooshing sound,
sends soothing, blissful thought's to ones brain,
the pounding of the deep blue water,
one feels less anxious here on after.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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January 6, 2013 at 6:13 AM
Very effectively descriptive... Terry
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