Waterfall

Tranquil water rush.
Misty burst of gushing blue.
Steaming down falling.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Freeman Avatar
February 10, 2010 at 11:33 AM
Rachel, Congratulation on your poem's feature this week. Sincerely, Moses
Mason Avatar
February 8, 2010 at 5:04 PM
Excellent haiku here, Rachel and a well-deserved selection to be featured this week here at the Soup!! Congratulations!!
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 8, 2010 at 3:10 PM
This is a very beautiful haiku. Congratulations on it being featured Rachel. Aloha, Connie
Fraser Avatar
February 8, 2010 at 10:49 AM
Congratulations on being featured on the home page this week with your poetry >> James
Brown Avatar
February 8, 2010 at 9:51 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. May you have many more Rachel. Love, Carol
Fisher Avatar
February 8, 2010 at 5:48 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette
Kendrick Avatar
October 15, 2009 at 4:07 PM
Nicely done Haiku. Love the thought behind the work. Keep writing. Sara
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