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05/11/25

Best Creative Kaiku

Fourth Place

Contest by Andrea Dietrich.

waterfall

                 dynamic fountain 
  
                oozing fom chasms

               of static mountain ~
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May 26, 2025 at 9:12 PM
I really like the contrast between lines one and three. Congrats on my contest, Anishs
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