waterfall

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05/11/25

Best Creative Kaiku

Fourth Place

Contest by Andrea Dietrich.

                 dynamic fountain 
  
                oozing fom chasms

               of static mountain ~

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/26/2025 9:12:00 PM

I really like the contrast between lines one and three. Congrats on my contest, Anishs