Watercolors

WATERCOLORS


If dawn has any value other than being a pretty picture
It is that the start of a new day offers potential
And the second chance we so often need:
For life is a series of mistakes interrupted by temporary successes
Which masquerade as victories for some and defeats for others;
But both are illusions and their colors can be, and often are, 
Easily washed out -  like the dawn in the early morning rain -
And we only see as through a glass darkly *  
With no guide  nor even hunch to lead us :
And we sketch  the outlines of our intentions
With little certainty  of filling in the colours or finishing the picture.

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NOTE

*      From the New Testament    -    Corinthians   13  :  12


       ( Lightfoot song  title selected =  EARLY MORNING RAIN )
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Written by  Sydney  Peck

Entered in   Francine Roberts’s  Contest      Write me a Lightfoot Poem
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Kendrick Avatar
April 18, 2012 at 3:04 PM
Enjoyed reading your inspiring work..Reads like a winner to me..Good luck in the contest..Sara
Situation Avatar
April 18, 2012 at 2:51 PM
nice entry.
Richards Avatar
April 18, 2012 at 2:35 PM
Oh, I like this.....! I haven't tackled this contest, but you picked a perfect song for a perfect poem!!
Mckenzie Avatar
April 18, 2012 at 1:33 PM
Lovely well expressed! Laura :)
Roberts Avatar
April 18, 2012 at 10:28 AM
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