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Water Works

Simple, elemental, essential, source of Life Coursing this blue planet’s rivers and streams Rush fast through the harbor burst out to sea Sail open ocean, charge shore by Moon’s guide Morph mass and matter, touch atmosphere Return condensed, slightly cloaked vaporized Creeping and crawling fog in to the Bay Over land, pushing pass mountainous range Pressurized band together, pouring rain, snow and sleet Then temperature rises to a certain degree Fluid get moody, puts on quite a show Loud crashing thunder opens the scene Live wires cross, strike hard down to earth Birth new vegetation after the burn Showering love and nurturing the grow All creatures gain from the work water sows Scarlett Critttenden For Member Contest "Write Me a Rippling Stream" 6/3/11

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Date: 6/9/2011 9:49:00 AM
Congratulations on a well deserved win in Constance La France's "Write Me A Rippling Stream" contest Scarlett. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/6/2011 10:03:00 AM
Congratulations on this win in the contest of constance, Scarlett
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Date: 6/6/2011 7:16:00 AM
Nice poem here Scarlett...Congrats on your win.
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Date: 6/5/2011 10:31:00 PM
Congratulations Scarlett with your win in my contest with this lovely poem~
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Date: 6/5/2011 10:03:00 PM
cheers to you, scarlett for the goody win! :) huggs
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Date: 6/5/2011 8:51:00 PM
Congrats Scarlett on your wonderful win in Constance's contest with this exciting entry ..enjoy with luv.. a sweet success...
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Date: 6/3/2011 4:34:00 PM
great write very well put together
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