Water Travel

‘Waves! Big waves!’ a boy yelled. 
Riding hide, the launch heaved and rolled, 
engine shattering, its sound changing, 
upon salty water we traveled. 

‘Waves! Big waves!’ a lady shrieked, 
captain’s compass lost unwanted, 
passengers screaming, launch was wobbling, 
upon salty water we traveled. 

‘Waves! Big waves!’ an old man yelped, 
brutal waves smashing, 
anxious passengers, water overlapping, 
upon salty water we traveled. 

‘Waves! Big waves!’ we all squealed, 
launch’s engine halted, 
passengers’ life jackets distributed, 
upon salty water we traveled. 

‘Waves! Big waves!’ we all prayed, 
passengers trembling, wetted and paled, 
the launch arrived safe and sound, 
upon salty water we traveled. 

This poem is an excerpt from the book: Whisper of Life
Read more writings of Cesar @ http://www.cesargealogo.com
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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January 15, 2016 at 8:16 PM
cESAR, I like every line of your poem above. Thank you for sharing. ** SKAT **
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August 6, 2011 at 10:51 PM
congrats on being featured i loved it awsome work
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August 2, 2011 at 3:40 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Cesar. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
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August 1, 2011 at 10:35 AM
Congrats Cesar on "Water Travel" being featured. Vince
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August 1, 2011 at 8:36 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup Cesar. Love, Carol
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July 31, 2011 at 7:10 PM
congrats cesar on your featured poem this week on PS.. a great one to share with us with luv..
Palli Avatar
December 5, 2010 at 2:26 AM
Loved the adventure!
Mehta Avatar
November 30, 2010 at 6:45 AM
Yes I can relate to the expression Waves! Big waves, very crerative piece of writing, cesar
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November 30, 2010 at 4:05 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Cesar. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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November 29, 2010 at 7:34 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your creative write tonight with its interesting theme.. hope your time on Soup will be fun and full of sharing with luv..
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