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Water the Element of Creation

Water covers three quarters of the earth, And provides for life that's diverse, It is an absolute requisite for life, And it's precipitation as rain, Is what keeps this planet sane. Without its hydration, All living beings energy is drained. There are very few substances that can hold water and are impermeable to its flow. Every seed you sow Needs water to grow. The earth emits her precious minerals, In the form of crystallization. On a dry day Water can invigorate a distressed brain. Water the all-weather weaver of life, Witnessing wonderful life flourishing. Water running down the hills as a river, Ensures green bounty on it banks, While meandering through the valleys and plains, And bestowing life even to the humble grains.

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Date: 4/27/2016 11:57:00 PM
Suraj, Congrats on your win. XOX ~LINDA~
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Date: 4/17/2016 10:22:00 PM
Congrats on superb win with this exquisite write Suraj..
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Suraj Jumani
Date: 4/18/2016 12:09:00 PM
Thanks Dr Upma
Date: 4/17/2016 11:40:00 AM
Suraj....congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Suraj Jumani
Date: 4/18/2016 12:08:00 PM
Thanks Laura
Date: 4/17/2016 6:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in my Water Element contest with such a descriptive write! Love the last 2 lines especially!
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Suraj Jumani
Date: 4/18/2016 12:07:00 PM
Thanks Brian. Really enjoyed being part of this contest.
Date: 4/11/2016 11:34:00 AM
Great descriptive write and you wove the words into the poem very well Suraj - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Suraj Jumani
Date: 4/13/2016 1:41:00 AM
Thanks Jan :)

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