Water the Element of Creation

Water covers three quarters of the earth,
And provides for life that's diverse,
It is an absolute requisite for life,
And it's precipitation as rain,
Is what keeps this planet sane.
Without its hydration,
All living beings energy is drained.

There are very few substances 
that can hold water 
and are impermeable to its flow.
Every seed you sow
Needs water to grow.

The earth emits her precious minerals,
In the form of crystallization.
On a dry day 
Water can invigorate a distressed brain.

Water the all-weather weaver of life,
Witnessing wonderful life flourishing. 
Water running down the hills as a river,
Ensures green bounty on it banks,
While meandering through the valleys and plains,
And bestowing life even to the humble grains.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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A   Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 11:57 PM
Suraj, Congrats on your win. XOX ~LINDA~
A. Sharma Avatar
April 17, 2016 at 10:22 PM
Congrats on superb win with this exquisite write Suraj..
Jumani Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 12:09 PM
Thanks Dr Upma
Scars Avatar
April 17, 2016 at 11:40 AM
Suraj....congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
Jumani Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 12:08 PM
Thanks Laura
Davey Avatar
April 17, 2016 at 6:34 AM
Congratulations on your placement in my Water Element contest with such a descriptive write! Love the last 2 lines especially!
Jumani Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 12:07 PM
Thanks Brian. Really enjoyed being part of this contest.
Allison Avatar
April 11, 2016 at 11:34 AM
Great descriptive write and you wove the words into the poem very well Suraj - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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April 13, 2016 at 1:41 AM
Thanks Jan :)
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