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Rain, rain, laugh and spray Send a hurricane today ~ Watch the island sway

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/13/2022 3:22:00 AM

That is about what happens on the isles when a hurricane plummets them. I feel for those people who get hit so much. Thanks for sharing this one and for dropping by my page. Sara

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/13/2022 12:18:00 PM

Hurricanes just... raising Cain! ~ The Devil made me do it

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 11/12/2022 9:10:00 PM

Many people are lucky not to have to witness the power of nature's might, such as in a hurricane. Your poem reminds me of the 'Rain, rain, go away' children's song. :)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/12/2022 9:12:00 PM

Actually, you are quite perceptive, Evelyn: I started out with 'rain, rain, go away' and then changed it. Happy Sunday! :) Gershon