Water Sports

Rain, rain, laugh and spray
 
    Send a hurricane today 
 
      ~ Watch the island sway
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Kendrick Avatar
November 13, 2022 at 3:22 AM
That is about what happens on the isles when a hurricane plummets them. I feel for those people who get hit so much. Thanks for sharing this one and for dropping by my page. Sara
Wolf Avatar
November 13, 2022 at 12:18 PM
Hurricanes just... raising Cain! ~ The Devil made me do it
Buehler Avatar
November 12, 2022 at 9:10 PM
Many people are lucky not to have to witness the power of nature's might, such as in a hurricane. Your poem reminds me of the 'Rain, rain, go away' children's song. :)
Wolf Avatar
November 12, 2022 at 9:12 PM
Actually, you are quite perceptive, Evelyn: I started out with 'rain, rain, go away' and then changed it. Happy Sunday! :) Gershon
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