Jack Horne Poet Limerick

Water Sport

She climbed on the table at tea
and said she was surfing the sea,
I did wonder why,
as tables are dry -
then noticed her puddles of pee...

written 17th July for Lisa's contest based on the table-surfer pic

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Jennifer Proxenos August 24, 2022 at 8:10 AM Hi Jack a fun write, nice little twist at the end. Enjoyed enormously. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Phyllis Babcock July 20, 2022 at 2:51 PM That was unexpected but funny. Nicely done Jack. love phyl

Christuraj Alex July 20, 2022 at 7:07 AM Interrelating end. Congratulations!

Andrea Dietrich July 19, 2022 at 1:50 PM I LOVE LOVE this one. It should have been a top win. Congrats, my friend

Paul Callus July 19, 2022 at 9:49 AM This was definitely unexpected, but so hilarious, Jack :) Your creative humour is amongst the best on this site! ~ Regards // paul

Terry Flood July 19, 2022 at 6:40 AM Now, that gave me a giggle, Jack. Thanks. Terry

Sara Kendrick July 19, 2022 at 5:32 AM Okay, I guess that was a bad time for the couple. Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Thanks for all your visits. Sara

Joseph May July 18, 2022 at 2:14 PM Ha ha, Very nice one