Water Portraits

Storm born prisms reflecting rainbow Arching between the hills below Moonbeams on water mirror the sky Far away the loon's haunting cry At the end of our street runs a creek Played in by many little feet Just one splendid drop from off the leaf Such beauty ours in moments brief
3/17/14
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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April 2, 2014 at 5:49 PM
BARBARA, Congratulations on your winning poem.... xox~ Linda
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April 2, 2014 at 11:06 AM
Great beauty in these brief lines! To me this was a perfect Crystalline poem and Water Portraits- the perfect title. My favorite.. Congrats Barbara on a fantastic win.. you write beautiful, Thank you dear for gracing my contest! love and huggs...
Mehta Avatar
April 2, 2014 at 1:57 AM
An apt form you have chosen for the theme of your poem. Congrats on the fine win,barbara
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April 2, 2014 at 12:12 AM
BARBARA:) Congratulations, ON YOUR WIN ~SKAT~
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March 17, 2014 at 7:34 PM
Lovely imagery in these. A pleasure to read! Love, Kim
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