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Water On the Brain

There’s a God, under my hat hangs out, to pick my brains Has one interest, on his mind he judges my ill gotten gains There’s a Devil in my pocket he’s there siphoning off veins Sometimes tops up my wallet wanting my soul in exchange The hat and pocket have holes but on balance, cause no pain My soul may be lost to money luckily my brain, has free rain By David Kavanagh

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Terry Flood

Date: 2/15/2023 11:34:00 AM

If I said to my Annie, “There's a God under my hat” she’d say, “Hmmm, I only see a cretin.” Enjoyed this muchly, David. Alas, I’ve checked my wallet and all I found was a few dead moths. Shucks!

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/15/2023 12:36:00 PM

Well that means your soul is safe Terry, Unless you already sold it to Annie, which means she’s probably fleecing your wallet, ah such is life, join the club! Cheers David

I Am Anaya

Date: 2/14/2023 12:56:00 PM

"he judges my ill-gotten gains" potent, sends chills down my spine! Devil is doing his job, but on God's leash! Great write!

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/14/2023 2:01:00 PM

A lot of wordplay going on here by design Anaya. But I’m only human and am prone to all temptations, both good and bad, so on balance hope I’m doing ok, Freak on a leash, love that song by Korn, cheers David

Mark Koplin

Date: 2/13/2023 3:14:00 PM

A very interesting view! I enjoyed reading it, thanks for sharing my friend!

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/14/2023 12:53:00 AM

Only a perspective write Mark, free rain/rein, on balance both are equally necessary for an enjoyable life, cheers David

Panagiota Romios

Date: 2/12/2023 6:44:00 PM

Very clever write and comparisons David, I Panagiota

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/13/2023 12:32:00 AM

Thank you Pangie, my brain’s always swimming in thought, some lame some insane, cheers David