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She lives among the vibrant water lilies, She lives in the clear, freshwater pond, She loves to tend her flower bed of peace, As sunbursts tend the gardens of beyond! She revels in warm, rife saffron sunshine, Relishing the finest of two exotic worlds, Like canaries plunge, upon grapes to dine, In gold summer shine or moonlight pearled!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 7/30/2021 2:35:00 PM
You seem to know these flowers' innermost thoughts. Amazing, Evelyn! Happy Weekend, Gershon
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/30/2021 6:02:00 PM
Thank you so much, Gershon. Enjoy your weekend as well. :D
Date: 7/29/2021 3:47:00 AM
Very pretty!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/29/2021 8:19:00 AM
Thank you. :)
Date: 7/28/2021 11:08:00 PM
To say it is a beautiful poem is an understatement. I find your poem incredibly soothing.
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Date: 7/29/2021 8:21:00 AM
So inspiring to know that, Victor. Thank you. :)
Date: 7/28/2021 8:38:00 PM
Beautiful write, Evelyn, give out a soothing feeling and a sight of color.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/28/2021 8:42:00 PM
I am gratified that you liked this verse, Eve. Thank you so much.
Date: 7/28/2021 8:11:00 PM
How lovely. I imagined I was in the garden with her. Peace, Perfect, Peace. Thank you, Evelyn
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/28/2021 8:20:00 PM
You are more than welcome, Shirley. Thank you for the joyful remarks.
Date: 7/28/2021 6:41:00 PM
WoW! Evelyn, I loved everything about this piece, from the breathtaking imagery and magical content. I enjoy reading stories about mermaids. I also found your write to be calm and soothing. As always, great job. Have a wonderful evening:-) Alexis
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/28/2021 8:01:00 PM
Your remarks are so delighting, Alexis. It makes me very happy to know that you took so many positive things away from this verse. Thank you with all my heart, for letting me know. Blessings, Evelyn :)
Date: 7/28/2021 6:31:00 PM
What a wonderful imagery and symbolism Evelyn, your poem inspire a lot of calmness and poise. Blessings and best regards
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/28/2021 8:05:00 PM
I am so happy to read your wonderful comments, my friend. Thank you very much. My very best wishes, Evelyn
Date: 7/28/2021 2:32:00 PM
So pretty. This was like escaping to some calm place reading it :)
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/28/2021 8:06:00 PM
I am thrilled that you enjoyed it. Thank you. :)

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