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Water Garden

Radiant petals,
Highlights of antique sunshine:
Pink pond reflections.

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Amy Green

March 23, 2010 at 8:05 AM

Your writing is so incredibly vivid, literally like a painting from beginning to end in my minds eye. Loved this!

Cesar Cantu

October 5, 2009 at 7:31 PM

Colorful. That's nature! Thanks for the experience =D

Abe Lopez

October 5, 2009 at 7:22 PM

Antique sunshine...... thats killer......great job!

Carol Sunshine Brown

October 5, 2009 at 9:03 AM

Absolutely beautiful Raul. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol

Carrie Richards

October 4, 2009 at 6:17 PM

I love the thought....antique sunshine...as if viewing a Monet, perhaps? Or another similar artist? Fine piece, Raul!

James Marshall Goff

October 4, 2009 at 1:55 PM

I see an old English Garden in this beauty! Raul!... jim

Carolyn Devonshire

October 4, 2009 at 12:52 PM

"Antique sunshine" is a priceless phrase, Raul. In Florida, the beauty of red poinsettias could leave red images on the pond; in Northern states, holly berries or red sunsets. Lovely imagery! Love, Carolyn