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Water Garden

Radiant petals, Highlights of antique sunshine: Pink pond reflections.

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Amy Green

Date: 3/23/2010 8:05:00 AM

Your writing is so incredibly vivid, literally like a painting from beginning to end in my minds eye. Loved this!

Cesar Cantu

Date: 10/5/2009 7:31:00 PM

Colorful. That's nature! Thanks for the experience =D

Abe Lopez

Date: 10/5/2009 7:22:00 PM

Antique sunshine...... thats killer......great job!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/5/2009 9:03:00 AM

Absolutely beautiful Raul. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/4/2009 6:17:00 PM

I love the thought....antique sunshine...as if viewing a Monet, perhaps? Or another similar artist? Fine piece, Raul!

James Marshall Goff

Date: 10/4/2009 1:55:00 PM

I see an old English Garden in this beauty! Raul!... jim

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/4/2009 12:52:00 PM

"Antique sunshine" is a priceless phrase, Raul. In Florida, the beauty of red poinsettias could leave red images on the pond; in Northern states, holly berries or red sunsets. Lovely imagery! Love, Carolyn

James Fraser

Date: 10/4/2009 12:34:00 PM

Lovely images in another lovely Haiku Raul >> James

Deirdre Omaidin

Date: 10/4/2009 11:35:00 AM

Wonderful descriptions here, a beautiful haiku, I am wondering if you are referring to sundown. Regards: Déirdre

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/4/2009 11:29:00 AM

i love these reflections Raul in your water garden-beautiful..---Charma

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/4/2009 10:46:00 AM

Interesting Haiku here.Raul. Antique sunshine. Keep writing. Sara