Water Garden

Radiant petals,
Highlights of antique sunshine:
Pink pond reflections.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 3/23/2010 8:05:00 AM
Your writing is so incredibly vivid, literally like a painting from beginning to end in my minds eye. Loved this!
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Date: 10/5/2009 7:31:00 PM
Colorful. That's nature! Thanks for the experience =D
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Date: 10/5/2009 7:22:00 PM
Antique sunshine...... thats killer......great job!
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Date: 10/5/2009 9:03:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful Raul. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/4/2009 6:17:00 PM
I love the thought....antique sunshine...as if viewing a Monet, perhaps? Or another similar artist? Fine piece, Raul!
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Date: 10/4/2009 1:55:00 PM
I see an old English Garden in this beauty! Raul!... jim
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Date: 10/4/2009 12:52:00 PM
"Antique sunshine" is a priceless phrase, Raul. In Florida, the beauty of red poinsettias could leave red images on the pond; in Northern states, holly berries or red sunsets. Lovely imagery! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/4/2009 12:34:00 PM
Lovely images in another lovely Haiku Raul >> James
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Date: 10/4/2009 11:35:00 AM
Wonderful descriptions here, a beautiful haiku, I am wondering if you are referring to sundown. Regards: Déirdre
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Date: 10/4/2009 11:29:00 AM
i love these reflections Raul in your water garden-beautiful..---Charma
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Date: 10/4/2009 10:46:00 AM
Interesting Haiku here.Raul. Antique sunshine. Keep writing. Sara
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