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Water Flows

Tinkering over the pebbles
flowing freely onwards
smoothly
leaving in its wake soft ripples
as it travels homewards
blithely. 

written 03/07/2015
by Shadow Hamilton
contest: Memento Of Waters
visual 5 used

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Edwardj Clark

Date: 5/17/2015 5:45:00 AM

Easy to understand and very descriptive and simply put. One can easily imagine the scene. Eddie

Estela Canama

Date: 4/4/2015 1:34:00 AM

This is a refreshing piece... Congrats, Shadow!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/28/2015 10:29:00 PM

wonderful win, dear. Big congratulations.

Eve Roper

Date: 3/27/2015 2:30:00 PM

Very beautiful descriptive write, Shadow, congratulations on your win a 7

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/27/2015 1:47:00 PM

Ahh!! Congrats on your work..Sara

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/27/2015 9:37:00 AM

I love the lilting quality of the water rippling blithely......how lovely !!!

Kp Nunez

Date: 3/27/2015 6:50:00 AM

Lovely execution of the visual interpretation, Shadow. Congratulations! Hugs! Kim :)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/27/2015 12:06:00 AM

Lovely, Shadow...congrats!! Hugs, Rhonda

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 3/27/2015 6:18:00 AM

ty Rhonda hugs

Joseph May

Date: 3/26/2015 9:51:00 PM

Congrats on your win Shadow

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 3/27/2015 6:20:00 AM

ty Joseph hugs

Edward Ebbs

Date: 3/26/2015 8:49:00 PM

Congrats Shadow...nice write :)

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 3/27/2015 6:19:00 AM

ty Ed hugs

Sandra Haight

Date: 3/26/2015 6:48:00 PM

Congratulations on your fine win, Shadow. Very nicely done and great interpretation of the visual. Hugs, Sandra

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 3/27/2015 6:18:00 AM

ty Sandra hugs

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/26/2015 4:39:00 PM

good flow of expression in every line... a pleasure to have you in my contest, shadow... my finest congrats and huggs

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 3/26/2015 5:22:00 PM

ty Nette great idea it was fun to write hugs

Robert Stoner Jr

Date: 3/26/2015 4:37:00 PM

Congratulations Shadow on this well deserved win

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 3/26/2015 5:24:00 PM

ty Robert hugs

Jan Allison

Date: 3/26/2015 3:50:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Shadow:-) Hugs Jan xx

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 3/26/2015 5:23:00 PM

ty Jan hugs

Laura Leiser

Date: 3/26/2015 3:44:00 PM

I enjoyed your interpretation of this visual, Shadow! Clever use of words and imagery. Congrats on your win!

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 3/26/2015 5:22:00 PM

ty Laura hugs

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 3/25/2015 6:46:00 PM

Love, love, love, love this simple but significant!

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 3/25/2015 7:10:00 PM

ty Maurice nice to see you hugs

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/11/2015 9:58:00 AM

Exchange the word many with soft and this will be perfect. This is a pretty piece Shadow. Good luck in the contest! Hugs Rick.

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 3/11/2015 11:46:00 AM

ty Rick I have added your poem to my winners list hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/9/2015 4:47:00 PM

very nice one, Shadow. Sure hope I can get home before some of these contests get filled up. I just saw yours is almost filled and I have it at my house in a file. I had no idea your contest would start filling so quickly today. OH my!!