Shadow Hamilton Poet Verse

Water Flows

Tinkering over the pebbles
flowing freely onwards
smoothly
leaving in its wake soft ripples
as it travels homewards
blithely. 

written 03/07/2015
by Shadow Hamilton
contest: Memento Of Waters
visual 5 used

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Edwardj Clark May 17, 2015 at 5:45 AM Easy to understand and very descriptive and simply put. One can easily imagine the scene. Eddie

Estela Canama April 4, 2015 at 1:34 AM This is a refreshing piece... Congrats, Shadow!

Andrea Dietrich March 28, 2015 at 10:29 PM wonderful win, dear. Big congratulations.

Eve Roper March 27, 2015 at 2:30 PM Very beautiful descriptive write, Shadow, congratulations on your win a 7

Sara Kendrick March 27, 2015 at 1:47 PM Ahh!! Congrats on your work..Sara

Carrie Richards March 27, 2015 at 9:37 AM I love the lilting quality of the water rippling blithely......how lovely !!!

Kp Nunez March 27, 2015 at 6:50 AM Lovely execution of the visual interpretation, Shadow. Congratulations! Hugs! Kim :)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders March 27, 2015 at 12:06 AM Lovely, Shadow...congrats!! Hugs, Rhonda Shadow Hamilton March 27, 2015 at 6:18 AM ty Rhonda hugs

Joseph May March 26, 2015 at 9:51 PM Congrats on your win Shadow Shadow Hamilton March 27, 2015 at 6:20 AM ty Joseph hugs

Edward Ebbs March 26, 2015 at 8:49 PM Congrats Shadow...nice write :) Shadow Hamilton March 27, 2015 at 6:19 AM ty Ed hugs

Sandra Haight March 26, 2015 at 6:48 PM Congratulations on your fine win, Shadow. Very nicely done and great interpretation of the visual. Hugs, Sandra Shadow Hamilton March 27, 2015 at 6:18 AM ty Sandra hugs

Nette Onclaud March 26, 2015 at 4:39 PM good flow of expression in every line... a pleasure to have you in my contest, shadow... my finest congrats and huggs Shadow Hamilton March 26, 2015 at 5:22 PM ty Nette great idea it was fun to write hugs

Robert Stoner Jr March 26, 2015 at 4:37 PM Congratulations Shadow on this well deserved win Shadow Hamilton March 26, 2015 at 5:24 PM ty Robert hugs

Jan Allison March 26, 2015 at 3:50 PM Dropping back with my congrats Shadow:-) Hugs Jan xx Shadow Hamilton March 26, 2015 at 5:23 PM ty Jan hugs

Laura Leiser March 26, 2015 at 3:44 PM I enjoyed your interpretation of this visual, Shadow! Clever use of words and imagery. Congrats on your win! Shadow Hamilton March 26, 2015 at 5:22 PM ty Laura hugs

Maurice Yvonne March 25, 2015 at 6:46 PM Love, love, love, love this simple but significant! Shadow Hamilton March 25, 2015 at 7:10 PM ty Maurice nice to see you hugs

Richard Lamoureux March 11, 2015 at 9:58 AM Exchange the word many with soft and this will be perfect. This is a pretty piece Shadow. Good luck in the contest! Hugs Rick. Shadow Hamilton March 11, 2015 at 11:46 AM ty Rick I have added your poem to my winners list hugs

Andrea Dietrich March 9, 2015 at 4:47 PM very nice one, Shadow. Sure hope I can get home before some of these contests get filled up. I just saw yours is almost filled and I have it at my house in a file. I had no idea your contest would start filling so quickly today. OH my!!

Donna Jones March 8, 2015 at 7:51 PM I can visualize the scene clearly..well done shadow.... Shadow Hamilton March 8, 2015 at 8:12 PM ty Donna so nice to see you hugs

John Fleming March 7, 2015 at 11:55 PM Nicely done, Shadow. My very best regards! :) john. Shadow Hamilton March 8, 2015 at 7:47 PM ty John hugs

Jan Allison March 7, 2015 at 2:05 PM beautiful flow to the poem Shadow the imagery is very tranquil - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx Jan Allison March 7, 2015 at 4:58 PM I am doing fine Shadow - I am more concerned about you! Hugs Jan xx Shadow Hamilton March 7, 2015 at 4:56 PM ty Jan hope you are doing ok hugs