Water Fall In Rockies

Sitting by the side of the waterfall,
I have tried to reach the sky,
The air may be thin, the trek may be hard,
But to touch the waterfall so close,
Was the dream of my life.

The splash of water on my face,
wakes my senses tired and asleep,
The water gushes past huge boulders,
making the best music I have heard in my life.

Try to peek under the sheet of water falling off the cliff,
The life time of memories will seem to be wrapped inside the mist,
Once I would lead my children along the trail,
Now I am watched by them if I could make the trail.

The water streams past logs, limbs, trees and stones,
Making its way through rough terrains,
Persistence in endeavors always attains the goal,
The eternal waterfall gives me the subtle message all along.

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Date: 10/6/2023 10:54:00 AM
I love waterfalls. I've only seen one...up close and personal...and it was in Colorado, but I don't think it was in any part of the Rockies. Very good imagery in this refreshing piece, Jay.
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Jay Narain
Date: 10/6/2023 11:09:00 AM
This was a little fall in some trail in Estes Park in Colorado.
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