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Water Dream

willow branches sweep
a river curves in shadows
lone swan ballet

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FJ Thomas

Date: 12/19/2022 5:01:00 PM

A perfect haiku for the lovely image SuZ!

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/21/2022 10:08:00 AM

Hi FJ. So nice to see you here and thanks for your lovely comment, Hugs, SuZ

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/1/2022 1:29:00 PM

I like this creative one. Way to go. I enjoyed reading it today. Thanks for sharing. Sara

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 11/6/2022 7:41:00 AM

So glad you liked this one Sara. Hard to put beauty into words sometimes. Love, SuZ

Howard Kerr

Date: 10/7/2022 3:20:00 AM

Hello Suzanne, I am most grateful for your recent reviews of my poems and short story. Thank you for including me in your schedule. You have written a haunting work with this haiku. Howard

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 10/7/2022 4:57:00 AM

Thanks, Howard: I enjoyed reading them. Glad you liked this Haiku. SuZ

Brian Sambourne

Date: 9/22/2022 9:16:00 PM

I echo all the positive comments here Suzanne. Your Haiku is imagist perfect. Congratulations! Brian

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 9/23/2022 2:47:00 AM

Thanks Brian: I went through a little Haiku spurt. I like to do them when my muse goes dormant on me.

J.W. Earnings

Date: 7/29/2022 8:02:00 PM

Lovely and amazing poem!

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 7/25/2022 12:19:00 PM

Sounds really cool... Very well penned

Bill Baker

Date: 7/17/2022 4:28:00 PM

Awesome Haiku and illustration, SuZ. Bill

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/10/2022 6:01:00 AM

Short forms when done so well are little slices of heaven.

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 9/23/2022 2:58:00 AM

I agree Richard. Especially nature Haikus, best, SuZ

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/5/2022 6:29:00 PM

Gorgeous pic-poem combo, Suzanne. ~ Happy landings, gw

Jennifer Fenn

Date: 6/11/2022 2:58:00 PM

This poem and photo are exquisite!

Jennifer Fenn

Date: 6/11/2022 2:57:00 PM

This poem and photo are exquisite!

Deb M

Date: 6/8/2022 3:53:00 AM

So lovely Suz…few words big description! Debx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/4/2022 3:17:00 PM

you always write with such beauty. yes, to what you said on my poem. We are all energy, and it just seems logical to me that we have a spirit which embodies that energy.

Michael Tor

Date: 6/3/2022 7:52:00 PM

Captive images that are perfectly related to your choice of words, Suzanne. Be blessed.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/31/2022 11:07:00 PM

This is the kind of haiku I love to read SuZ. It is more like reading from the masters. Just beautiful! I hope you are well? I was under the weather for two months with bronchitis but I have turned the corner on it now. It is wonderful to be reading poetry again. Blessings xxoo

Harry Horsman

Date: 4/22/2022 1:32:00 AM

Even without the picture, Suz, the poetry is so visual.

Timothy Ray

Date: 4/18/2022 2:30:00 PM

i love this form for the simplistic beauty it evokes, such as this....loved it, serene achievement

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 4/11/2022 2:25:00 PM

The words and picture are a perfect match. Lovely haiku. love phyl

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/11/2022 3:59:00 PM

Thanks Phyl. I found the image on Pixabay the form of a white swan is so perfect it looks like a ballet even when swimming. That was also the sense I was hoping to convey. SuZ

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/11/2022 1:57:00 PM

Perfect imagery, SuZ. A beautiful swan ballet.

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/11/2022 4:01:00 PM

Hi Vijay: I found the image on Pixabay the form of a white swan is so perfect it looks like a ballet even when swimming. That was also the sense I was hoping to convey, Best SuZ