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Water Dream

willow branches sweep
a river curves in shadows
lone swan ballet

beautydancenaturehaiku

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FJ Thomas

December 19, 2022 at 5:01 PM

A perfect haiku for the lovely image SuZ!

Suzanne Delaney

December 21, 2022 at 10:08 AM

Hi FJ. So nice to see you here and thanks for your lovely comment, Hugs, SuZ

Sara Kendrick

November 1, 2022 at 1:29 PM

I like this creative one. Way to go. I enjoyed reading it today. Thanks for sharing. Sara

Suzanne Delaney

November 6, 2022 at 7:41 AM

So glad you liked this one Sara. Hard to put beauty into words sometimes. Love, SuZ

Howard Kerr

October 7, 2022 at 3:20 AM

Hello Suzanne, I am most grateful for your recent reviews of my poems and short story. Thank you for including me in your schedule. You have written a haunting work with this haiku. Howard

Suzanne Delaney

October 7, 2022 at 4:57 AM

Thanks, Howard: I enjoyed reading them. Glad you liked this Haiku. SuZ

Brian Sambourne

September 22, 2022 at 9:16 PM

I echo all the positive comments here Suzanne. Your Haiku is imagist perfect. Congratulations! Brian

Suzanne Delaney

September 23, 2022 at 2:47 AM

Thanks Brian: I went through a little Haiku spurt. I like to do them when my muse goes dormant on me.

David William Breidenthal

July 29, 2022 at 8:02 PM

Lovely and amazing poem!

Paghunda Zahid

July 25, 2022 at 12:19 PM

Sounds really cool... Very well penned

Bill Baker

July 17, 2022 at 4:28 PM

Awesome Haiku and illustration, SuZ. Bill

Richard Lamoureux

July 10, 2022 at 6:01 AM

Short forms when done so well are little slices of heaven.

Suzanne Delaney

September 23, 2022 at 2:58 AM

I agree Richard. Especially nature Haikus, best, SuZ

Gershon Wolf

July 5, 2022 at 6:29 PM

Gorgeous pic-poem combo, Suzanne. ~ Happy landings, gw

Jennifer Fenn

June 11, 2022 at 2:58 PM

This poem and photo are exquisite!

Jennifer Fenn

June 11, 2022 at 2:57 PM

This poem and photo are exquisite!

Deb M

June 8, 2022 at 3:53 AM

So lovely Suz…few words big description! Debx

Andrea Dietrich

June 4, 2022 at 3:17 PM

you always write with such beauty. yes, to what you said on my poem. We are all energy, and it just seems logical to me that we have a spirit which embodies that energy.

Michael Tor

June 3, 2022 at 7:52 PM

Captive images that are perfectly related to your choice of words, Suzanne. Be blessed.

Connie Marcum Wong

May 31, 2022 at 11:07 PM

This is the kind of haiku I love to read SuZ. It is more like reading from the masters. Just beautiful! I hope you are well? I was under the weather for two months with bronchitis but I have turned the corner on it now. It is wonderful to be reading poetry again. Blessings xxoo

Harry Horsman

April 22, 2022 at 1:32 AM

Even without the picture, Suz, the poetry is so visual.

Timothy Ray

April 18, 2022 at 2:30 PM

i love this form for the simplistic beauty it evokes, such as this....loved it, serene achievement

Phyllis Babcock

April 11, 2022 at 2:25 PM

The words and picture are a perfect match. Lovely haiku. love phyl

Suzanne Delaney

April 11, 2022 at 3:59 PM

Thanks Phyl. I found the image on Pixabay the form of a white swan is so perfect it looks like a ballet even when swimming. That was also the sense I was hoping to convey. SuZ

Vijay Pandit

April 11, 2022 at 1:57 PM

Perfect imagery, SuZ. A beautiful swan ballet.

Suzanne Delaney

April 11, 2022 at 4:01 PM

Hi Vijay: I found the image on Pixabay the form of a white swan is so perfect it looks like a ballet even when swimming. That was also the sense I was hoping to convey, Best SuZ