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Water Dance

In the watery bed I float along Soothing thoughts swirl aimlessly in my head Blue green melting into a lovely song Whispering trickles of words to be said Dancing so beautifully on the toe Ballerinas drown on their timely own Spinning in circles big little and low Wonderful and flowing let it be known Small asters and rose petals float about The aquatic surface so pure and smooth Ripples and waves forcing me in and out The differences in motion break and move Watery eyes gazing into the sun My journey of wet life has just begun

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/26/2015 2:31:00 PM
Hi Dana Back here again, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. ~Always & Forever~ LINDA
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Date: 4/18/2015 1:57:00 PM
Dana, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 4/16/2015 6:16:00 PM
Beautiful poem! This paints a beautiful picture in my mind. Wonderful write! I hope you are enjoying it here at Poetry Soup! Its wonderful here so I hope you will enjoy it. I can't wait to read more of your work! :) <3 Tash
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Date: 4/15/2015 6:10:00 PM
Dana, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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