Water Coursing To the Sea

Bubbling, bouncing, coursing
Singing, shouting, playing
Honoring, joyful, joyful
Joyful, fun, fun, fun
Joy, Joy, Joy, Black gunk funk
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Marcum Wong Avatar
August 13, 2010 at 5:11 PM
Sara, So glad to see this one in the winner's circle. Congratulations! Aloha, Connie
Brown Avatar
August 12, 2010 at 10:42 AM
Congratulations Sara on your win in S K A T 's contest "Oil Spilled Out Anger ". Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
August 12, 2010 at 8:23 AM
Congrats Sara on your HM in Irma's contest for the oil spill.. for this remarkable write and win today.. enjoy your special honor as well..with luv..
Chachere Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 1:32 PM
sounds like a blast(: lol.black gunk funk, funny ~Always
Walters Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 6:32 AM
Wow this is so jubilant then quite a turn at the end! THis is a fun to read poem that made me think too! Nicely done :) Kris
Dietrich Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 6:57 PM
So sacrastic!
Culverhouse Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 6:13 PM
enjoyed...oil sludge??
Falotico Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 1:58 PM
Made me smile!!! thats all i needed...luv Michael
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August 4, 2010 at 11:08 AM
Enjoyed your poem once again. Sounds as if you are enjoying a Nice song...p.d.
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 10:54 AM
The joy then the dismay and tragedy in your last line say it all! Great poem Sara!
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