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Water Coursing To the Sea

Bubbling, bouncing, coursing Singing, shouting, playing Honoring, joyful, joyful Joyful, fun, fun, fun Joy, Joy, Joy, Black gunk funk

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/13/2010 5:11:00 PM
Sara, So glad to see this one in the winner's circle. Congratulations! Aloha, Connie
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Date: 8/12/2010 10:42:00 AM
Congratulations Sara on your win in S K A T 's contest "Oil Spilled Out Anger ". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/12/2010 8:23:00 AM
Congrats Sara on your HM in Irma's contest for the oil spill.. for this remarkable write and win today.. enjoy your special honor as well..with luv..
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Date: 8/5/2010 1:32:00 PM
sounds like a blast(: lol.black gunk funk, funny ~Always
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Date: 8/5/2010 6:32:00 AM
Wow this is so jubilant then quite a turn at the end! THis is a fun to read poem that made me think too! Nicely done :) Kris
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Date: 8/4/2010 6:57:00 PM
So sacrastic!
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Date: 8/4/2010 6:13:00 PM
enjoyed...oil sludge??
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Date: 8/4/2010 1:58:00 PM
Made me smile!!! thats all i needed...luv Michael
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Date: 8/4/2010 11:08:00 AM
Enjoyed your poem once again. Sounds as if you are enjoying a Nice song...p.d.
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Date: 8/4/2010 10:54:00 AM
The joy then the dismay and tragedy in your last line say it all! Great poem Sara!
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