Water and Land

Water
                                               rough, calm
                                     swimming, sailing, surfing
                                   freighters, buoys, fields, earth
                                     tilling, planting, harvesting
                                               fertile, barren 
                                                     land



                                                 11.10.2014
                                         Sponsor Regina Riddle
                                              Diamante Poem
                                                      2nd
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Johnson-Saunders Avatar
November 23, 2014 at 9:50 PM
Congrats on a wonderful win, Brenda! I almost a similar one then decided on using sky instead...I love yours! Hugs, Rhonda
Kendrick Avatar
November 21, 2014 at 11:21 AM
I see your name is on the winner's list..Let me salute you and enjoy the bliss..Congrats..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
November 20, 2014 at 11:09 PM
I really liked yours!! big congrats.
Onclaud Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 10:48 AM
impressive one, Brenda.. sweet congrats
Kayode Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 10:39 AM
Truly Brenda,congrats on the win...huggs
Yvonne Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 3:25 PM
Yours is another one that avoided good and bad and just went for contrast. Very creative as always with your poetry. Congratulations on your fine win.
Schumacker Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 1:02 PM
Hi Brenda, Very nicely done diamante. Congratulations on a well deserved win. Earl
May Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 12:21 PM
Congrats on your win Brenda
Haight Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 9:31 AM
Hi Brenda, stopping by with my congratulations to you for your win. I love the words you used to create this contrast! Hugs, Sandra
Goswami Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 9:16 AM
Congratulations Mam! Thank you very much...
Andresen Avatar
November 16, 2014 at 11:56 PM
- A really wonderful diamond, Brenda !!! Congratulations! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
November 16, 2014 at 2:52 PM
dropping back with my congrats Brenda:-) Hugs jan xx
Andresen Avatar
November 13, 2014 at 7:18 AM
- Well done, great diamante Brenda - Good luck in the contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 7:11 PM
Thanks Anne Lise
Callus Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 1:07 PM
A diamante with very good content...intelligent choice of words....the balance kept extremely well. a sure winner! // paul
Callus Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 10:52 AM
...and so it is...a sure winner!!:)
Gorelick Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 8:42 PM
Perfect! Sure to do well...BG
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 11, 2014 at 9:31 AM
Thanks Barbara
Mcdaid Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 6:58 PM
very beautifully crafted piece brenda
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 7:07 PM
Thanks Liam.
Kendrick Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 3:44 PM
Great way to go with this one for the contest..Reads like a winner to me..A very good contrast..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 7:06 PM
Thank you Sara.
Nance Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 3:28 PM
Great job with this form, best of contest luck to ya ! :) :)
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 7:06 PM
Thanks Casarah
Kiser Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 2:02 PM
Wonderfully penned.
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 3:08 PM
Thank you ML
Haight Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 1:03 PM
Brenda, such a great choice of words with your contrast going from water to land. Good luck in the contest! Hugs, Sandra
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 3:07 PM
Thank you Sandra.
Allison Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 11:42 AM
beautifully penned diamante Brenda:-) good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 12:54 PM
Thanks Jan. XOXO
Trifiatis Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 11:06 AM
A well-cut faultless diamond, dear Brenda!
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 12:53 PM
Thank you so much Demetrios
Petersen Potter Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 9:24 AM
Very nice Brenda! Well crafted in form and subject. GL in the contest my dear friend. :) love and hugs! xxxx D.
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 12:52 PM
Thank you Dorian.
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