Water and Land

Water
                                               rough, calm
                                     swimming, sailing, surfing
                                   freighters, buoys, fields, earth
                                     tilling, planting, harvesting
                                               fertile, barren 
                                                     land



                                                 11.10.2014
                                         Sponsor Regina Riddle
                                              Diamante Poem
                                                      2nd

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 11/23/2014 9:50:00 PM
Congrats on a wonderful win, Brenda! I almost a similar one then decided on using sky instead...I love yours! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 11/21/2014 11:21:00 AM
I see your name is on the winner's list..Let me salute you and enjoy the bliss..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 11/20/2014 11:09:00 PM
I really liked yours!! big congrats.
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Date: 11/18/2014 10:48:00 AM
impressive one, Brenda.. sweet congrats
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Date: 11/18/2014 10:39:00 AM
Truly Brenda,congrats on the win...huggs
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Date: 11/17/2014 3:25:00 PM
Yours is another one that avoided good and bad and just went for contrast. Very creative as always with your poetry. Congratulations on your fine win.
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Date: 11/17/2014 1:02:00 PM
Hi Brenda, Very nicely done diamante. Congratulations on a well deserved win. Earl
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Date: 11/17/2014 12:21:00 PM
Congrats on your win Brenda
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Date: 11/17/2014 9:31:00 AM
Hi Brenda, stopping by with my congratulations to you for your win. I love the words you used to create this contrast! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 11/17/2014 9:16:00 AM
Congratulations Mam! Thank you very much...
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Date: 11/16/2014 11:56:00 PM
- A really wonderful diamond, Brenda !!! Congratulations! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/16/2014 2:52:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats Brenda:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/13/2014 7:18:00 AM
- Well done, great diamante Brenda - Good luck in the contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/18/2014 7:11:00 PM
Thanks Anne Lise
Date: 11/12/2014 1:07:00 PM
A diamante with very good content...intelligent choice of words....the balance kept extremely well. a sure winner! // paul
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Paul Callus
Date: 11/17/2014 10:52:00 AM
...and so it is...a sure winner!!:)
Date: 11/10/2014 8:42:00 PM
Perfect! Sure to do well...BG
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/11/2014 9:31:00 AM
Thanks Barbara
Date: 11/10/2014 6:58:00 PM
very beautifully crafted piece brenda
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/10/2014 7:07:00 PM
Thanks Liam.
Date: 11/10/2014 3:44:00 PM
Great way to go with this one for the contest..Reads like a winner to me..A very good contrast..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/10/2014 7:06:00 PM
Thank you Sara.
Date: 11/10/2014 3:28:00 PM
Great job with this form, best of contest luck to ya ! :) :)
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/10/2014 7:06:00 PM
Thanks Casarah
Date: 11/10/2014 2:02:00 PM
Wonderfully penned.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/10/2014 3:08:00 PM
Thank you ML
Date: 11/10/2014 1:03:00 PM
Brenda, such a great choice of words with your contrast going from water to land. Good luck in the contest! Hugs, Sandra
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/10/2014 3:07:00 PM
Thank you Sandra.
Date: 11/10/2014 11:42:00 AM
beautifully penned diamante Brenda:-) good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/10/2014 12:54:00 PM
Thanks Jan. XOXO
Date: 11/10/2014 11:06:00 AM
A well-cut faultless diamond, dear Brenda!
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/10/2014 12:53:00 PM
Thank you so much Demetrios
Date: 11/10/2014 9:24:00 AM
Very nice Brenda! Well crafted in form and subject. GL in the contest my dear friend. :) love and hugs! xxxx D.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/10/2014 12:52:00 PM
Thank you Dorian.
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