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Written on August 26, 2023

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Sometimes, I race the wind - And, erase the sun’s glistening – Embracing your quaking trees, Nourishing you with liquid Comfort… Even the streams appreciate my favors, As I pierce the air with delight, insight - Into the mysteries of your thinking, your feelings… Lingering in the air, like a gentle breath - Hastening through the light, soft Gentle, yet resilient to the touch – never doubting Even flames, stubborn to be snuffed out, Listen to my voice as I convince them to be doused - By my promises… Even the doubts are left in the past, who remembers - You are wiser than I can share – your wisdom… Like the healing of the winds, reassure the spirit That light, sun, can bring sustenance from your filth, The mud caked around your foundation, resting In the clay, the loam… your very substance, your love Embracing me, with all my kindness as I melt away - Your silence… Lifting the streams, the rivers, the oceans… Rising to meet you with a promise that I am strong, Stronger than you knew when we first met – just two Elements, risking our hearts, risking our thoughts, As we discovered one another’s weakness’, One another’s strengths and one another’s promise – To become the best of friends! Together, we can accomplish more than a heart can imagine - Let this love affair take us to the most wonderful places!

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Date: 9/23/2023 8:22:00 PM
I think I should have given you 1st place as I am re-reading these to congratulate the winners and to tell everyone that won. You did an excellent job of putting earth and water into a relationship. Well done and congratulations on your win in my contest. Most amazing job with this poem.
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Date: 8/26/2023 8:05:00 PM
Water and earth are a good pair as your poem implies. One enriches the other. Well spoken Regina. A lovely poem.
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Date: 8/26/2023 4:50:00 AM
Hey, a very intriguing write Regina. shall have to let it sit and reflect on it again. that is, I believe, the essence of a good poem....
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Regina Mcintosh
Date: 8/26/2023 4:55:00 AM
It was a challenge to write about two elements for sure :) Hope it's a little understandable. Love to you and God bless you too. Love, Gina

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