Water

The water is breathing
In it recedes
Out it proceeds
On with its mission
Flowing with gravities orders
Reflecting the barren trees
Shimmering with the breeze
The water speaks to me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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April 13, 2016 at 3:37 PM
Rachel Bennett, awesome poem. SKAT
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April 5, 2016 at 5:12 PM
this is really nice. I like it a lot, Rachel.
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