Water

Spirit cleanse my soul
Cleanse all life for everyone
Please cleanse us
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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March 25, 2014 at 12:23 AM
Interesting write. However, try to find synonymous equivalents for "cleanse", such as "wash", "purify", "bathe", etc. It's not a good idea to use the same word excessively. That's why Monsieur Roget invented the Thesaurus.
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