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Water To obey no law, but gravities very own and harbor so much life; so much death. Power in every ounce to sway to an unheard rhythm danced by only streams, lakes and rivers. Yes they feel the silent melodies handed down from their benefactors: the sea, and oceans. Independent for need of nothing or no one. Older than time itself and the most highs trusted advisor. Did you know waters devotion to God is equal to everyone and none at all? Equal? Geez, I’m thirsty. To be drank, wholly consumed and to come back as you were before. Water. To fall from the heavens and pollute the earth with your purity! Who gives you the right to save so many lives, to keep humanity dependent on you? “Huh”, persuasive you are to use your elegant beauty to induce men to believe in your benevolent colors you behold, which traps the golden hearts of men – Yes. Secret beholder, you are a vow to never tell when told, to baptize the soul of believers, to remain as humble as the north winds. A true sustainer you are with an endearing revelation to all who listen. By Terry L. Hillmon “It is part of the nature of every definitive love that sooner or later it can reach the beloved only in infinity.” - Rainer Maria Rilke

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Date: 6/22/2016 9:57:00 PM
nice to read again, Terry,skat
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Date: 12/17/2013 10:45:00 PM
Sorry for the late warm Welcome to the soup... Terry , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Welcome to poetry soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 12/7/2013 1:32:00 PM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Terry ! - Nice to read your first poem here.:)) - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/7/2013 1:25:00 PM
Terry,A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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