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Water

It's clear Like your tears It's cold Just like you heart It's translucent Like your soul But it It satisfies people You don't It helps people live But you're better off dead It keeps people clean But you're too dirty to understand One sip can be so refreshing But you drain the life out of me Water is something you'll never be

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/24/2011 9:38:00 AM
Great comparision. I loved it, nice job.
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Date: 10/21/2011 11:24:00 PM
just great glad you got a selected poem very fine read
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Date: 10/21/2011 7:02:00 PM
I love "WATER"!!!!!! well expressed passion!!
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Date: 10/21/2011 5:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Summer
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Date: 10/14/2011 7:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Summer. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/30/2011 9:56:00 PM
An awesome poem. You are such an interesting poet! There is an anger here as pure as distilled water. Bravo!
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