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blood is thinker than water that leaves me under the bridge i as what is the matter i don't mean any thing gold is more presious blood silver more solid then blood all i want is your undieing love with blessings sent from up above the blood flows slow glod will stay shiny and never grow bold silver will tarnished but still can be shined and never will get spiritually old i am water would i not quench your thirst i am woman wouldn't i come first i don't want you to leave your blood never in a day.. but water can be controled and not let the flood take it away you can go with your blood, i will find my own way hoping to flow with a flood that wont stray im not thicker then blood, of this i'm aware knowing you leave me for your people and leave me scared i could never compare, and at the drop of a dime you will me so unaware, blood is thicker then water, and water i choose to be i will never flow slow, but flood with love and blessings sent from up above... I AM WATER...

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Date: 4/26/2011 8:50:00 PM
Very beautifully written poem. Like it a lot
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Date: 3/18/2011 12:27:00 PM
I just can't believe how fast this week has gone by. I am enjoying reading the many magnificent poems here at PoetrySoup today. I am glad yours was among the ones I was able to read Rose. I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with sunshine and lots of inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/17/2011 1:46:00 PM
Very interesting Diane... and how are you by the way? And yes I see why u choose water... great element by the way... we can't do with out... loved it.. have a nice saint Patty*s day
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