Water

Ripples of water flow
down the stream
silently the tears  fall
so much hurt inside
staring at my reflection
i must not feel the fear
my hands touches t he water
to brace the emotions
i bury my face
in my hands
why
it is so unfair 
as i leave to walk away 
slowly my sorrows fades
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Bagnall Avatar
April 1, 2010 at 5:06 AM
Welcome to poetry soup, lovely poem, you have captured that emotion very well.
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March 31, 2010 at 11:54 AM
Clever little poem Teresa, an enjoyable read > a warm welcome to the Soup to you >> James
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March 30, 2010 at 4:33 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Teresa. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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