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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/11/2013 3:41:00 PM

very nice. I want to see if you have others I can find way back here!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/22/2010 5:05:00 PM

Mirrors are always revealing! Light & Love

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 2/21/2010 6:45:00 AM

that's so true! Enjoyed this haiku Caryl :)

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 2/20/2010 5:14:00 AM

Caryl, Those natural mirrors, are glassy reflections of God in Heaven. Thank you for this lovely thought. Keep writing. Lovingly, Dane Ann

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/19/2010 12:03:00 PM

Great write in this one. I especially like the second line. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara

Susan Palli

Date: 2/17/2010 10:18:00 AM

I liked that

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/17/2010 5:47:00 AM

You have presented to us very interesting poetry today. It was a pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing it with us here at PoetrySoup Caryl. Wishing you the best in the contest. Love, Carol

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 2/16/2010 4:23:00 PM

Good entry, my dear. Thank you so much for your kind remarks! I watch those commercials with interest. I think the first three and the fair, plus the the cellphone as walkie talkie are the best. Least favorite was the robot voice by the Hollywood pool. But they are versatile, to be sure. That's a very intriguing remark! Thank you! Regards, Gerard.