Christopher Steven Coan Poet Haiku

Water

Light upon night water
Your reflection is beauty here
I came to your breast

Water in a throat 
Apart from you I cannot
In my mind and heart

Gone apart from you
The apple of my very eye
Within yours a rose

In my life as rain
Freshening my soul and mind
Yours a lilly in dirt

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John Freeman February 4, 2010 at 7:00 PM Congratulations on a much deserved feature this week, Christropher. Sincerely, Moses

Janette Fisher February 2, 2010 at 11:11 AM Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette

Audrey Haick February 2, 2010 at 9:34 AM Hey Steven, my congratulations on your poem being featured this week on the Soup! Peace, Audrey

Daver Austin February 2, 2010 at 6:18 AM I like the sensitive comparisons here. I also love multiple haiku. Congrats on this selection. Love, daver

Sara Kendrick February 1, 2010 at 4:06 PM Very passionate write in this week's featured poem. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

James Fraser February 1, 2010 at 1:16 PM Many congratulations on your poetry being featured this week >> James

Ann Rich February 1, 2010 at 5:20 AM Contrats to you on being featured by PoetrySoup this week. Keep pen and paper on hand & never say never! AR

Carol Sunshine Brown February 1, 2010 at 3:56 AM Congratulations on your featured poetry this week Christopher. May you have many more. Love, Carol

Caroline Cécile Delacroix January 31, 2010 at 6:55 PM Awesome sets of Haiku! Congrats on your poem being featured this week. Best wishes, Caroline.

Doris Culverhouse January 31, 2010 at 6:18 PM congrats on the featured poem, enjoyed reading today!!