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Water

Light upon night water Your reflection is beauty here I came to your breast Water in a throat Apart from you I cannot In my mind and heart Gone apart from you The apple of my very eye Within yours a rose In my life as rain Freshening my soul and mind Yours a lilly in dirt

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/4/2010 7:00:00 PM
Congratulations on a much deserved feature this week, Christropher. Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 2/2/2010 11:11:00 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette
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Date: 2/2/2010 9:34:00 AM
Hey Steven, my congratulations on your poem being featured this week on the Soup! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 2/2/2010 6:18:00 AM
I like the sensitive comparisons here. I also love multiple haiku. Congrats on this selection. Love, daver
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Date: 2/1/2010 4:06:00 PM
Very passionate write in this week's featured poem. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 2/1/2010 1:16:00 PM
Many congratulations on your poetry being featured this week >> James
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Date: 2/1/2010 5:20:00 AM
Contrats to you on being featured by PoetrySoup this week. Keep pen and paper on hand & never say never! AR
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Date: 2/1/2010 3:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poetry this week Christopher. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/31/2010 6:55:00 PM
Awesome sets of Haiku! Congrats on your poem being featured this week. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 1/31/2010 6:18:00 PM
congrats on the featured poem, enjoyed reading today!!
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