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Water

Beautiful and blue You wash away my sorrows Forever stay pure

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/17/2009 3:28:00 PM
Beautiful thoughts put to pen in this Haiku. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 10/16/2009 8:36:00 PM
Deep down the human soul, 'tis purity we crave; this write describes water beyond water, & purity, the everlasting treasure ... Priscy, love your new voice, your dreams ... poetry is the best echo of the human mind ... cheer up, the best is yet to be! Canny.
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