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Water

Written: May 16, 2025, for contest  Sponsored by: Suzette Richards         

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willingly play each kEy for me—
piano notes whisper
 into   water
   as a misty sea       bReEzE
                laced  w i t h       intoxication

afternoon symphony of o.c.e.a.n   waves 
draws in—enchanting   senses 

dance among a seashore
upon sugar coated sands
fragrance of sea briny winds—
                  breathing low tide
  beach leans ...
in sundown shade

swaying with melody
foLLowed twilight
as ivORy glow

we fell as rain and g a t h e r e d
in cupped hands
t.u.m.b.l.e.d to sea

soft into roots      then pulled again up—
through leaves 
out through sky ...

returning as mist
as weightless skin against the       s.h.o.r.e

r.i.v.e.r in the shape of       remembering
like w.a.t.e.r    turning back to—water

MOONLIGHT    silhouetted    stone
rebeLLious    rainbow   of   frozen   saudade
as s.c.o.p.e   from   flares splatter

kenopsia in lack of memory
                  —plate—river sails—
                                                ripples across the bay ...
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George Avatar
May 18, 2025 at 4:47 AM
Your mind thinks in ways so unique and you invest a special glow to any subject you take up and you choose words not ordinary but the most apt and rare. Rain absorbed through roots and then pulled up through leaves remain in the sky as mist and again fall into the earth as water. This cyclic process goes on and on. Very creative. All the Best.
Empress Avatar
May 17, 2025 at 7:48 AM
A very different take on this prompt! I havent read yet the contest requirements but i bet you did follow the instructions very well dr sotto! I loved the lines "we fell as rain and g a t h e r e d in cupped hands t.u.m.b.l.e.d to sea" descriptive and creative! One of those poems that made me think ! Pleasure reading you! Sending you light always
Hind Avatar
May 16, 2025 at 7:25 PM
"r.i.v.e.r in the shape of remembering like w.a.t.e.r turning back to—water" stunning lines. A fav -
Goldsmith Avatar
May 16, 2025 at 2:20 PM
I enjoyed reading your creative "Water" write with your great picture. "Good Luck" Have a lovely day/weekend writing away..........
Andresen Avatar
May 16, 2025 at 10:08 AM
- A beautiful description of water, Las :) - A colorful dance with harmonious music :) - Wishing you a lovely weekend :) - hugs
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