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Water

The waves roll in crashing onto the shore Just like my tormentors banging on my door. I fight so hard to keep them out but they don't go away They just scream and shout. In to the sea the drag me deep on to the sea bed Where the fish's sleep But it's quiet here with no one around no more confusion Head not spinning around They have made my pain go away but to keep this peace Here I must stay..

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Date: 7/8/2023 5:47:00 AM
I like your poem, I think the second stanza has a wonderful leap and turn and sound and feels a lot like the waves. I don't know if this is a first draft but I think you did well if it is.
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