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Titans tilting, tangibly human windmills Swaying sentries, harboring haloed witness Lofted coal mines, timber canary cages Whispers from redwoods 29 Jan 2019

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Date: 2/15/2019 8:32:00 PM
an amazing poem, Mark. I hope it scored high. I still have not had time to peruse the winner list but wow, you did GREAT.
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Date: 2/15/2019 2:23:00 AM
Oooooh I really like this one david! So atmospheric, every word adding to the picture. This is one of my favourites of these! Congratulations.
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Date: 2/14/2019 7:55:00 AM
Redwoods and watchtowers join forces to deliver a winning poem, David! Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul
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Date: 2/13/2019 7:09:00 PM
This is another entry that made this contest tough to judge. Your poem is one of the ones I like best from this contest. Congrats.
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Date: 2/13/2019 1:10:00 PM
this is a beautiful and haunting piece. From the perfect title to the hushed sadness of the last line... Congratulations!
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Date: 2/13/2019 10:20:00 AM
This sweeps across the environment with a gentle hand David. Each time I read it I catch more of the subtle ambiguity and as I do, perhaps I should have placed you higher.
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