Ele Ven Poet Rhyme

Watching You Sleep

Who's still dreaming?
Believe me when I say the gleam in your eyes is my morning sunrise...
Shadows subside down your peaks and valleys 
as I watch pure beauty come into my life.
I've been watching you for hours to see my sunrise, 
so please wake up and open them eyes.

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Poet Destroyer A February 23, 2013 at 12:27 PM Ele , today's a lovely day, and here you find me reading the feature poems of the week. !!CONGRATULATIONS with your nice verse!! always~ LINDA :-)

Ingibo Benson February 15, 2013 at 1:58 PM Nice read, dear! keep the ink flowing Ele Ven February 15, 2013 at 2:17 PM Thank you so much Ingibo :)

Anne-Lise Andresen February 15, 2013 at 1:54 PM A lovely small poem, Ele. - Welcome to P-Soup. - Hope you will get much pleasure sharing your poems and thoughts here with us. - Good luck. - Wishing you a lovely weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Ele Ven February 15, 2013 at 2:17 PM Thank you Anne. Sharing my writings for the first time in my life. Quite a vulnerable experience but feels beautiful. Have a great weekend :) Ele