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Watching the New Moon Rise

Again, nightly watching, One , Two ... Then dawn and on ... There then the change, I feel the switch, I sense her newness, Feel a shyness.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/23/2012 12:52:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful poem about the new moon rise. I could imagine every verse that was written.
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Date: 3/29/2012 10:57:00 AM
thank you
Date: 3/23/2012 11:34:00 AM
I am enjoying reading up on all the poetry I can today. I am happy yours was one that I was able to read today. The weekend is here and I must also make time for my family life. I will be back on Monday as usual and I wish you a beautiful weekend filled with renewed inspiration Wm. Love, Carol
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