Watching the New Moon Rise

Again, nightly watching,
One , Two ...
Then dawn and on ...
There then the change,
I feel the switch,
I sense her newness,
Feel a shyness.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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March 23, 2012 at 12:52 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful poem about the new moon rise. I could imagine every verse that was written.
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March 29, 2012 at 10:57 AM
thank you
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March 23, 2012 at 11:34 AM
I am enjoying reading up on all the poetry I can today. I am happy yours was one that I was able to read today. The weekend is here and I must also make time for my family life. I will be back on Monday as usual and I wish you a beautiful weekend filled with renewed inspiration Wm. Love, Carol
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