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Watching Me

ice cold stare, Old mans glare it all makes me.. quite aware. He tries to hide but cannot dare for he is the one in my layer. Mommy why is he still standing there? He won’t leave me. Winter comes so does spring fall passes summer brings. every year he stays here. and never disappears. one year he finally came near i told him it was time and he pulled out a spindle of wire and a bottle of wine. a thimble of twine. He tied me up and hung me up on my balcony. he was very kind. to give me a sip of some red wine. I fell asleep. as peaceful.. as can be. ~ Helena Haku Ulery

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Date: 9/19/2015 7:47:00 PM
Haku, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 9/15/2015 3:51:00 PM
Hey Haku, a warm and hearty welcome to Poetry Soup! Great imagery and writing. I'm looking forward to more of your poems. Well done! Be Blessed, Neva
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Date: 9/15/2015 1:36:00 PM
Haku, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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