Watching From My Kitchen Window-Jq

Red robin searches for worms
Goldfinches out in the storm
Hummingbirds flutter about
A red squirrel chirps and spouts

Worms near wet feathers of red
Storm drops on hummingbird's head
About, a finch lands on seed
Spouts from red squirrels with greed


3/11/19

Jueju-Qijue With A Twist Contest

Sponsor:Charles Messina
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Roper Avatar
March 26, 2019 at 9:08 PM
Tania, great write, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*
Kitchin Avatar
April 17, 2019 at 8:09 PM
Thank you Eve!
Kiser Avatar
March 13, 2019 at 11:54 PM
Well done; great imagery; reads quite well; good luck in the contest.
Kitchin Avatar
March 14, 2019 at 3:33 PM
Thank you!
Allison Avatar
March 13, 2019 at 9:23 AM
what sweet imagery Tania:- we have no squirrels here I love reading poems with them in:-) hugs jan xx
Kitchin Avatar
March 13, 2019 at 11:23 AM
Thank you Jan! :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
March 11, 2019 at 8:03 PM
Darling pen! Enjoyed! Good luck in the contest :) xomo!
Kitchin Avatar
March 11, 2019 at 8:36 PM
Thank you Mo!
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