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Watching Figure Skating

They glide across the ice like silk, Then leap and twirl and spin, Their bodies molded to the perfect Shape that they are in. Their costumes sparkle in the lights, The music sets the tone As every skater claims the ice As his or hers alone. The years of training culminate In one routine, one chance To prove to all the judges They’re the ones who should advance. I always feel so bad when On the road to reach the top, Someone’s nerves kick in and suddenly, We witness a ker-plop.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 7/14/2021 1:18:00 PM
Love this.. I think the figure skating pairs is definitely the best sports to watch. Although they have to cover the same tricks, each routine is unique and creative. :)
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Date: 4/20/2021 3:43:00 AM
I feel as you do, Ilene, more so because I was a figure skater in my youth and loved it. But the ker-plops, as you say, were devastating in an otherwise faultless skate, not to mention painful. I even audition for Ice Capades, but they were looking for blond, blue-eyed young guys, not brown haired, brown eyed guys. / Maurice
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Date: 4/20/2021 3:40:00 AM
I feel as you do, Ilene, more so because I was a figure skater in my youth and loved it. But the ker-plops, as you say, were devastating in an otherwise faultless skate, not to mention painful. I even audition for Ice Capades, but they were looking for blond, blue-eyed young guys, not brown haired, brown eyed guys. / Maurice
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Date: 4/20/2021 3:41:00 AM
I feel as you do, Ilene, more so because I was a figure skater in my youth and loved it. But the ker-plops, as you say, were devastating in an otherwise faultless skate, not to mention painful. I even audition for Ice Capades, but they were looking for blond, blue-eyed young guys, not brown haired, brown eyed guys. / Maurice
Date: 4/12/2021 5:25:00 PM
Those ker-plops must be beyond exasperating, eh?! But that's what it's all about when the pressure's on. These guys know what they were signing up for.
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Date: 4/12/2021 12:18:00 PM
Another thoroughly enjoyable display of your expertise! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 4/11/2021 5:29:00 PM
They make it look so easy when in reality, it isn't. Good write as usual, Ilene.
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Date: 4/11/2021 5:29:00 PM
Love watching figure skating, how they do those lifts on ice is amazing, though I’m always afraid there’ll be a ker-plop... Belle
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Date: 4/11/2021 4:11:00 PM
I too am always rooting to see the 10s.
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Date: 4/11/2021 3:22:00 PM
Such a fun energetic piece of writing! The end had me giggling. Thanks for sharing, Ms. Bauer!
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Date: 4/11/2021 3:03:00 PM
I'm in awe of their skill on the ice, used to love watching torville and dean and John Curry:-) hugs Jan xx
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