Watch This Space

The air is still
A feel of freshness is about
After a short sharp shower
Smell of grass and plants are overcoming

It is an old cemetery
Headstones all askew
Some overgrown with ivy
Like a brides veil it hides from view

Names and places
Of loved ones, hmm
Wonder if they called them that
When they were living at home

My nosiness overcomes me,
Scraping away some of the ivy
I read my name, a trifle disconcerted
I pull at the ivy looking for dates and where

Was dated today, I catch my breadth
Was this the beginning of my decline,
Only when I pulled myself together………..
I saw it was dated 100 years ago

Smiling I tidy the plants,
Making them look as though 
they hadn’t been disturbed,
then I wondered, who was she!
How and why did she die?

Was she family from the past
I felt a tightening around my throat
Was she telling me she was murdered
Or warning me 
gripping my throat I staggered away.


Watch this Space........



Penned 25/9/2016

Contest overgrown with vines

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 9/25/2016 12:18:00 PM
gosh Seren there are a couple of contests this could be entered in - goodluck and Happy Birthday:-) hugs Jan xx
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/25/2016 1:19:00 PM
lol you think so....its bad enough trying to write for just one....Seren
Date: 9/25/2016 10:38:00 AM
I love the drama in this - it is very creative. All the best of luck in all things ... CayCay
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 9/25/2016 5:38:00 PM
I get my new number on 10-3, happens every year, darn it! On the upside, it is a blessing. Oh my, I just took both sides and totally Libra'd it! CayCay
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/25/2016 1:20:00 PM
Thank you CayCay...... Oh you are a Libra too.... when is it yours...Seren
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 9/25/2016 10:39:00 AM
Oh, Happy Day fellow Libra! CayCay
Date: 9/25/2016 7:42:00 AM
Great poem Seren. Happy Birthday !!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/25/2016 9:40:00 AM
wow you remembered thanks Tim......Seren
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