Sotto Poet Poet Rhyme

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Watch Out Son

Written: November 27, 2023
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Listen carefully, son, and avoid despair.
When you require me, I'm just there. 
And trust me if you've secrets to share. 
Allow your heart to rejoice and dare.

No matter what, I will hold your hand.
Believe my behest, by your side will stand.
Find solace, and don't stop to expand.
I am your light, ergo walk in my land.

Trust God with all your worldly concern
Obscure concepts are useless to learn
Love is a gift you earn and must return.
Even if you obtain one full of wilting fern

Coming to you, I shall establish my abode.
Making heed of all the utterances I've told.
The bounty I exhibit I will never withhold.
They're beyond valuable than silver or gold.

Lean on, believe in, and heed my word.
None will bar me from breaking wall's world. 
Into the appropriate route, you are hurled.
While heartbeats or fire smoke is curled,

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Valsa George November 30, 2023 at 8:46 PM Beautifully rhyming and sweetly flowing words of endearment and wisdom. What better gift can a father give to his dear son! Your reassuring words of love and ever abiding support will be a never failing source of inspiration for him. "Trust God with all your worldly concern Obscure concepts are useless to learn Love is a gift you earn and must return. Even if you obtain one full of wilting fern". Lovely stanza and a sweet poem.

Speaks Volumes November 30, 2023 at 6:55 PM Such comforting, reassuring words of devotion and unhindered love. To promise unconditional love, must be the most profound undertaking its possible to make and it is exclusively given only from a parent. No other love, comes with no exception, no conditions, no chance of fading no use by date. Your poem said all this to me my friend and more, much more.

Silent One November 28, 2023 at 12:18 PM A wonderful touching and inspirational message to your son.. I hope he gets to read it.. I never had a father, but I think all children deserve a father like you.. your poem flows and rhymes very well as always.. you rhyme so much, i wonder if you keep rhyming when you talk... great poetry Sotto..

Ink Empress November 28, 2023 at 7:12 AM Dear Sotto, This is such a beautiful and soulful write written so sincerely for your son, I absolutely love the messages passed on here in such a poetic manner with brilliant rhymes etc, i especially love “ Love is a gift you earn and must return. Even if you obtain one full of wilting fern“ i agree and that is the best advice one can pass on to their children. “ No matter what, I will hold your hand.“ i say this to my son always too. And theres a song too iv dedicated which says that, fave

Vijay Pandit November 28, 2023 at 5:15 AM Awesome advice--endearing sentiments. Your poem shines in love of beloved father.

Hilda Greenhough November 27, 2023 at 6:08 PM Raising a son tskes talent and time. I liked your poem

Kim Rodrigues November 27, 2023 at 6:03 PM Enjoyed, Lasaad! A father’s wisdom for the taking by his son!

Paige Hind November 27, 2023 at 5:00 PM Very inspirational! I enjoyed reading this. This poem makes one hope...you know? :)