Watch and Wait

Stillness seeds this cell 
of death-borne illness, 
underscores the needs of one 
who cannot function by himself. 
Bed sheets icy white, fading flowers 
once bright, now lifeless, 
litter uselessly. 

A steady stream of visitors 
will offer their support, 
feeling helpless, hopeless, 
as they fumble for the words 
stuck in their throats. 

Monitors wink, 
blink their indifference; 
scant recognition, 
little consolation for a father 
and his sorrow-stricken son.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Pinet Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 11:01 AM
The emotions cling to this piece like a second skin. A little melancholy, with a slow pace that entraps the reader into your emotional flow. Good work. Emile. #7
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February 14, 2016 at 12:24 PM
Thank you for your kind remarks Emile... I am most grateful. Best wishes, Keith
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