Wasting Love

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WAISTING LOVE

FROM MY ROOFTOP GARDEN, 28 JANUARY 2017, MY PHOTO, ©

Much I raised my voice 

Angrily you responded

Love's time we wasted!






© Demetrios Trifiatis
      28 January 2017

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Charlie Smith

Date: 1/28/2017 8:44:00 AM

Makes so much sense...

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/28/2017 10:39:00 AM

Thank you my friend, Charlie!

Probir Gupta

Date: 1/28/2017 8:24:00 AM

Indeed so ... We waste our time in vain ... No anger in your glistening grains ...

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/28/2017 10:42:00 AM

Waste of love's time make us miserable and unhappy! Thank you my friend, Probir! Man has to wise up!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/28/2017 7:30:00 AM

- Time is precious ... use it for love - Great written, my friend - a 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/28/2017 10:44:00 AM

True my friend, Anne-Lise! Thank you so much for your gracious visit! hugs

White Wolf

Date: 1/28/2017 4:25:00 AM

Reminds me of when I was married! But making up was always fun! Great Haiku, my friend!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/28/2017 5:55:00 AM

Remember next time not to waste any time in fighting my friend, White Wolf! Thank you!