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Waste has worsened widespread. World's oceans polluted. Wonder throwaway mind Wadded to poor beings Wreckage of planes and trains Wastage slash-and-burn seas Worldbank work tackle trash 2nd place in the W Pleiades contest Written: May 9, 2021 Pleiades W Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Kim Merryman

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Date: 5/13/2021 8:52:00 PM
Great theme and flow in your verse, Lasaad, congratulations on Kim's Pleiades "W" win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 5/13/2021 7:51:00 AM
Loved reading your thoughts on waste through this wonderful Pleiades Lasaad... Congrats on your win... God bless... ~ Ani
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Date: 5/11/2021 1:35:00 PM
Great descriptions, Lasaad! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 5/11/2021 6:58:00 PM
Dear Kim thanks for your very nice contests and for my placement too, have a great evening
Date: 5/11/2021 1:30:00 PM
I am so glad this one scored high. Second place is very nice and well deserved. Congrats.
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Date: 5/11/2021 7:00:00 PM
Thank you so much Dear Andrea, and congratulations to you too for the top placement
Date: 5/11/2021 12:34:00 PM
- Back with a congratulations, Las :) - I knew this one would score high - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/11/2021 6:59:00 PM
Thanks dear Anne-lise, for your congratulations, it means a lot to me , regards and hugs
Date: 5/11/2021 8:59:00 AM
Just seen the results now Lasaad, I’m not surprised I’m back with congratulations, at least we’re moving in the right direction, cheers David
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Date: 5/11/2021 9:55:00 AM
Thanks, David, and that's the best part of it. When you feel you are in the right direction and improving, have a great day, my friend.
Date: 5/10/2021 4:14:00 PM
you said it very very well. Great topic for W.
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Date: 5/10/2021 6:03:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, appreciate your reading and kind words, have a great evening, warm hugs
Date: 5/10/2021 1:56:00 PM
Oh this is so good Lasaad, grabs us straight away, it really is a nightmare scenario, and makes me ashamed at the same time, this has got to be a huge contender, best wishes for the contest, cheers David
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Date: 5/10/2021 2:43:00 PM
Thanks, My friend David, I know this subject is a little meticulous, but it has to be taken care of; thanks for your support wish you a great evening.
Date: 5/10/2021 11:17:00 AM
The tragedy of it all is that pollution is so avoidable. A great first step is electing leaders who care about and take protecting our world seriously. A very fine pleiades W poem, Lasaad. Best wishes for the contest, my friend.
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Date: 5/10/2021 12:15:00 PM
Thanks, Evelyn, for your sweet and kind words; I hope we can contribute to alleviating some of our great problems.Best regards Evelyn
Date: 5/10/2021 3:46:00 AM
These days I dare not follow documentaries because they make me mad. So many fish die because of plastic objects, broken glass etc. Important poem. Should get top place.
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Date: 5/10/2021 12:28:00 PM
That's true dear Victor, but, I think we should keep looking for those documentaries, at least to get alerted ahead of time in case of a huge hurricane or any natural disaster
Date: 5/9/2021 12:21:00 PM
Excellent submission to Kim's contest. It is also one of the world's greatest problems, as you well know, Lasaad. Thanks for highlighting it.
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Date: 5/10/2021 12:13:00 PM
Thanks, Milton, It makes me feel good to see that you like my writing and have no issues with it because that gives me a lot of motivation to push myself further
Date: 5/9/2021 10:33:00 AM
A horrific situation that our planet and life on it is found in and your poem depicts it very well! Good luck my friend Lasaad!
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Date: 5/9/2021 11:10:00 AM
Dearest Demetrios, your thoughtful words consistently revive my brain and soul and urge me to improve. Thank you very much for your support. You are an exceptionally great person.
Date: 5/9/2021 9:52:00 AM
- Already .... the letter W ... these contests fly fast :) - You have as always a great theme and made it excellent, Las :) - Best wishes for a top win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise: )
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Date: 5/9/2021 10:28:00 AM
Dear Anne-Lise, It is uplifting to me to see that you have visited my page and given valuable feedback on my work. Since you have been kind to me, your kind words have had a pleasing effect on me. Have a great afternoon, warm hugs, love, and peace// Lasaad
Date: 5/9/2021 5:21:00 AM
The situation has got a lot worse and things only last a short time and you have to replace them, mankind has become the throwaway society and treats the earth like a thrash can. Well written Lasaad and good luck. Tom
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Date: 5/9/2021 9:41:00 AM
Thanks for the kind words and the lovely wishes; that's true; humankind has become a throwaway society. Have a wonderful evening Tom, best regards

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