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Waste

Waste has worsened widespread. 
                                     World's oceans polluted. 
                                    Wonder throwaway mind 
                                      Wadded to poor beings 
                                 Wreckage of planes and trains 
                                  Wastage slash-and-burn seas 
                                   Worldbank work tackle trash


2nd place in the W Pleiades contest

Written: May 9, 2021

Pleiades W Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Kim Merryman
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Roper Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 8:52 PM
Great theme and flow in your verse, Lasaad, congratulations on Kim's Pleiades "W" win. Hugs Eve
Jayasankar Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 7:51 AM
Loved reading your thoughts on waste through this wonderful Pleiades Lasaad... Congrats on your win... God bless... ~ Ani
Merryman Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 1:35 PM
Great descriptions, Lasaad! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
Poet Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 6:58 PM
Dear Kim thanks for your very nice contests and for my placement too, have a great evening
Dietrich Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 1:30 PM
I am so glad this one scored high. Second place is very nice and well deserved. Congrats.
Poet Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 7:00 PM
Thank you so much Dear Andrea, and congratulations to you too for the top placement
Andresen Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 12:34 PM
- Back with a congratulations, Las :) - I knew this one would score high - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Poet Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 6:59 PM
Thanks dear Anne-lise, for your congratulations, it means a lot to me , regards and hugs
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May 11, 2021 at 8:59 AM
Just seen the results now Lasaad, I’m not surprised I’m back with congratulations, at least we’re moving in the right direction, cheers David
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May 11, 2021 at 9:55 AM
Thanks, David, and that's the best part of it. When you feel you are in the right direction and improving, have a great day, my friend.
Dietrich Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 4:14 PM
you said it very very well. Great topic for W.
Poet Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 6:03 PM
Thanks Andrea, appreciate your reading and kind words, have a great evening, warm hugs
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May 10, 2021 at 1:56 PM
Oh this is so good Lasaad, grabs us straight away, it really is a nightmare scenario, and makes me ashamed at the same time, this has got to be a huge contender, best wishes for the contest, cheers David
Poet Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 2:43 PM
Thanks, My friend David, I know this subject is a little meticulous, but it has to be taken care of; thanks for your support wish you a great evening.
Buehler Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 11:17 AM
The tragedy of it all is that pollution is so avoidable. A great first step is electing leaders who care about and take protecting our world seriously. A very fine pleiades W poem, Lasaad. Best wishes for the contest, my friend.
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May 10, 2021 at 12:15 PM
Thanks, Evelyn, for your sweet and kind words; I hope we can contribute to alleviating some of our great problems.Best regards Evelyn
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May 10, 2021 at 3:46 AM
These days I dare not follow documentaries because they make me mad. So many fish die because of plastic objects, broken glass etc. Important poem. Should get top place.
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May 10, 2021 at 12:28 PM
That's true dear Victor, but, I think we should keep looking for those documentaries, at least to get alerted ahead of time in case of a huge hurricane or any natural disaster
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May 9, 2021 at 12:21 PM
Excellent submission to Kim's contest. It is also one of the world's greatest problems, as you well know, Lasaad. Thanks for highlighting it.
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May 10, 2021 at 12:13 PM
Thanks, Milton, It makes me feel good to see that you like my writing and have no issues with it because that gives me a lot of motivation to push myself further
Trifiatis Avatar
May 9, 2021 at 10:33 AM
A horrific situation that our planet and life on it is found in and your poem depicts it very well! Good luck my friend Lasaad!
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May 9, 2021 at 11:10 AM
Dearest Demetrios, your thoughtful words consistently revive my brain and soul and urge me to improve. Thank you very much for your support. You are an exceptionally great person.
Andresen Avatar
May 9, 2021 at 9:52 AM
- Already .... the letter W ... these contests fly fast :) - You have as always a great theme and made it excellent, Las :) - Best wishes for a top win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise: )
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May 9, 2021 at 10:28 AM
Dear Anne-Lise, It is uplifting to me to see that you have visited my page and given valuable feedback on my work. Since you have been kind to me, your kind words have had a pleasing effect on me. Have a great afternoon, warm hugs, love, and peace// Lasaad
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May 9, 2021 at 5:21 AM
The situation has got a lot worse and things only last a short time and you have to replace them, mankind has become the throwaway society and treats the earth like a thrash can. Well written Lasaad and good luck. Tom
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May 9, 2021 at 9:41 AM
Thanks for the kind words and the lovely wishes; that's true; humankind has become a throwaway society. Have a wonderful evening Tom, best regards
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