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Wasn'T Meant To Be

through my heart, you drag your claws, you seemed so perfect, even your flaws, is it just me? i can not tell, is this heaven? is it hell? do i alone, feel this way? left to cry day by day could you feel my pulse end you left because i wouldn't bend eyes so cold heart so still i give up do what you will as if my love could keep you here, you go and do what i fear could it be me reading wrong what i feel oh so strong from you head to toe telling me to let you go? hello soup loving people. i wrote this poem with my freind jezabella. enjoy

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Date: 5/10/2012 8:32:00 AM
Wow great poem keep writing
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Date: 5/7/2012 7:51:00 PM
WOW,STUPENDOUS WRITE ....I love it...xoxoxo
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Date: 5/7/2012 1:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Maridean. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/7/2012 3:03:00 AM
Loved the flow to this poem...Keep up the good work.Take Care. Mary xx
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Date: 5/6/2012 12:06:00 AM
destoyer poet, thank you for supporting my good freind maridean. she has tons of things to bring to the soup. haha.
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Date: 5/5/2012 10:08:00 PM
Love it!Will wait for more of your poems:)
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Date: 5/5/2012 8:42:00 PM
Maridean, first of all lets thank your friend Jezabella, you 2 did good.. everything is embraced perfectly here.. everything can be read wrong.. love is a very complicated situation.. yup.. a situation..lol.. anyways~ someone should never fold or bend when all emotions are all out of place. I like it when we fall in love with someone ignoring all them flaws. that is the beauty of life. Love is blind and makes everything feel perfect, even someones flaws.. love the beginning of your poem ~;-) love it.. have yourself a good
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