Wasn'T Meant To Be

through my heart,
you drag your claws,
you seemed so perfect,
even your flaws,

is it just me?
i can not tell,
is this heaven?
is it hell?

do i alone,
feel this way?
left to cry
day by day

could you feel
my pulse end
you left because
i wouldn't bend

eyes so cold 
heart so still
i give up
do what you will

as if my love
could keep you here,
you go and do
what i fear

could it be me
reading wrong
what i feel
oh so strong

from you
head to toe
telling me
to let you go?

hello soup loving people. i wrote this poem with my freind jezabella. enjoy
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Williams Avatar
May 10, 2012 at 8:32 AM
Wow great poem keep writing
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May 7, 2012 at 7:51 PM
WOW,STUPENDOUS WRITE ....I love it...xoxoxo
Brown Avatar
May 7, 2012 at 1:27 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Maridean. Love, Carol
Moussa Avatar
May 7, 2012 at 3:03 AM
Loved the flow to this poem...Keep up the good work.Take Care. Mary xx
Singe Avatar
May 6, 2012 at 12:06 AM
destoyer poet, thank you for supporting my good freind maridean. she has tons of things to bring to the soup. haha.
Poet Avatar
May 5, 2012 at 10:08 PM
Love it!Will wait for more of your poems:)
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May 5, 2012 at 8:42 PM
Maridean, first of all lets thank your friend Jezabella, you 2 did good.. everything is embraced perfectly here.. everything can be read wrong.. love is a very complicated situation.. yup.. a situation..lol.. anyways~ someone should never fold or bend when all emotions are all out of place. I like it when we fall in love with someone ignoring all them flaws. that is the beauty of life. Love is blind and makes everything feel perfect, even someones flaws.. love the beginning of your poem ~;-) love it.. have yourself a good
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