Washing Up

The small rat was excited about The little she rat he soon would greet He was in love there was no doubt He washed before they were to meet When done he put lifts in his shoes To be tall, was where his mind was at He didn't want for her to decide He was a low down dirty rat!

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Line Gauthier

Date: 1/31/2018 10:33:00 PM

Good one, Pat. This one is really adorable.

Pat Adams
Date: 4/20/2018 3:40:00 PM

Thanks Line! I hope you watched the video. It is really crazy!!!

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 1/30/2018 8:28:00 PM

I hope that rat remembered to wash behind his ears; that is remarkable how they soap up like us human beings! Love the video and your cute poem matches it perfectly! Thanks for the smile!~Che :)

Pat Adams
Date: 4/20/2018 3:40:00 PM

Thanks. Yes, I thought the video was really funny, so I couldn't resist!.....80)

Jan Allison

Date: 1/30/2018 3:36:00 PM

that is amazing the video and poem fit perfectly together... they are not called 'rats' her its considered unlucky we call them joeys or longtails! :-) hugs Jan xx

Pat Adams
Date: 4/20/2018 3:39:00 PM

Wow! .. That's weird! I mean Unique! .. 80)

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 1/30/2018 10:20:00 AM

Giggles ;)

Pat Adams
Date: 4/20/2018 3:38:00 PM

Thankful Smile!!!..80)