Washing Up

The small rat was excited about
The little she rat he soon would greet
He was in love there was no doubt
He washed before they were to meet

When done he put lifts in his shoes
To be tall, was where his mind was at
He didn't want for her to decide
He was a low down dirty rat!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
January 31, 2018 at 10:33 PM
Good one, Pat. This one is really adorable.
Adams Avatar
April 20, 2018 at 3:40 PM
Thanks Line! I hope you watched the video. It is really crazy!!!
Hoffman Avatar
January 30, 2018 at 8:28 PM
I hope that rat remembered to wash behind his ears; that is remarkable how they soap up like us human beings! Love the video and your cute poem matches it perfectly! Thanks for the smile!~Che :)
Adams Avatar
April 20, 2018 at 3:40 PM
Thanks. Yes, I thought the video was really funny, so I couldn't resist!.....80)
Allison Avatar
January 30, 2018 at 3:36 PM
that is amazing the video and poem fit perfectly together... they are not called 'rats' her its considered unlucky we call them joeys or longtails! :-) hugs Jan xx
Adams Avatar
April 20, 2018 at 3:39 PM
Wow! .. That's weird! I mean Unique! .. 80)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
January 30, 2018 at 10:20 AM
Giggles ;)
Adams Avatar
April 20, 2018 at 3:38 PM
Thankful Smile!!!..80)
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