Wash It Away

Wake up fresh in the morning, free from daytime's infections
   Splash a pot of coffee on your pristine complexion  

Rev up your car's engine: Send a cloud of smoke into the air
   Motor off to work: Emit toxic pollutants over the road everywhere

Sprint to your desk: Turn on the computers, the a/c and the lights
   Ratchet up enough current to frazzle countless insects and mites

At break, leave the office: Enjoy a quick smoke
   Then smell your clothes -- a tar-and-nicotine cloak

Back at your desk, sweat pours down your body
   Mingled with the smell of your cloak, you're off to the potty

Where you befoul the toilet, the hallway and office
   With tincture of excrement, exotic odor so nauseous ...
 
                              **********  

Now this poem's not going to sink, burn or crash
   Here's how to remove gobs of rubbish and trash

Step into the shower at the close of each day
   Turn on the water full-throttle: Blast those germs away

Let the welcome droplets cascade down your head, face and arms
   Wash the stench away with H2O's charms

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 8/2/2018 6:50:00 PM
Very interesting write my friend...enjoyed from launch...^WW^
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Date: 8/2/2018 9:46:00 PM
So glad you found this one enjoyable. Appreciate your visit and your encouragement! Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 8/2/2018 5:46:00 PM
WoW! This is some fabulous Smile poetry, Gershon. I adore the crescendo line: Let the welcome droplets cascade down your head, face and arms. Wash the stench away with H2O's charms. This smooth-as-butter poem got some serious gritty bite. Excellente dish of stellar poetry. Love and smiles and smiles of joy always.
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Date: 8/2/2018 9:46:00 PM
When I read compliments like these from you, I get a lift like you can't imagine. It makes all the revising worthwhile. Thank you so much, my friend! Best always, Gershon
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