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Wash Away Thoughts

The sun leaves today For the rain to come and play To water the land As it will cool off the air Wash away thoughts, for new ones Heidi Sands 8/15/17

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Date: 8/16/2017 1:01:00 PM
A good one Heidi--make room for new thoughts!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/16/2017 1:11:00 PM
Hi Vijay. Yes, always good to make room for nice new thoughts! Thank you :)
Date: 8/16/2017 8:29:00 AM
That's beautiful Heidi! I love it when it rains...it cools everything down and waters the plants! My wife likes that part! I really enjoyed reading your delightful poem this morning! You have brought to me a smile from your exquisite writing today! What a spectacular piece my friend, Great Work!!
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Date: 8/16/2017 9:23:00 AM
Hi Russell. Yes, it cools things down and waters the plants. I am happy you enjoyed this today. And it is great to hear, it brought a smile! Thank you for your consistent support. I look forward to your inspiring comments and appreciate them very much :)

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