Wash Away Thoughts

The sun leaves today
For the rain to come and play
To water the land
As it will cool off the air
Wash away thoughts, for new ones

Heidi Sands

8/15/17
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Pandit Avatar
August 16, 2017 at 1:01 PM
A good one Heidi--make room for new thoughts!
Sands Avatar
August 16, 2017 at 1:11 PM
Hi Vijay. Yes, always good to make room for nice new thoughts! Thank you :)
Sivey Avatar
August 16, 2017 at 8:29 AM
That's beautiful Heidi! I love it when it rains...it cools everything down and waters the plants! My wife likes that part! I really enjoyed reading your delightful poem this morning! You have brought to me a smile from your exquisite writing today! What a spectacular piece my friend, Great Work!!
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August 16, 2017 at 9:23 AM
Hi Russell. Yes, it cools things down and waters the plants. I am happy you enjoyed this today. And it is great to hear, it brought a smile! Thank you for your consistent support. I look forward to your inspiring comments and appreciate them very much :)
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