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Was That You?

Tangled up in the sheets man that was fun. Yeah id stick around my darlin. But the train's a waitting and so I gotta run. Tommy and Phil will be at the dinner waitting with ready ear. Screw the coffee darlin. I preffer a smoke and a beer. The waitress sat staring at me as I sat lost without a clue. She said thought you had to leave town. memories get hazy but she reminded me with a swift kick oh crap darlin was that you. Sometmes it's not so easy to recall. Precious memories shared. In a nightclubs bathroom stall. Hey it was a perfect moment amougnst many. Sure I recall your name. It's Rebecca Sandy okay I wouldnt have guessed Kenny. Sometimes it"s awkward hitting on a chick only to have her reply but I thought we were threw. Maybe i should lay off the booze. Cause im really getting tired of asking was that you?

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Date: 11/19/2009 11:22:00 AM
This is a really good poem i Like the rhymes keep writing
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Date: 11/11/2009 6:47:00 PM
I love those Rhymes i am a fan of you :)
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Date: 11/11/2009 10:24:00 AM
lmao wow this is funny remids me of that song. "im in love with ya baby and i dont even know your name." talking about his waitress, but it turns out he marries the wrong one cause he was smashed haha Always Raiin
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