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Was It You Or Me

Amorphous memories in perfumed pages dance across waves of scintillation I wonder what could have been dusk and dawn haven't changed a bit sepia emotions bloom in my heart again in undulating frequencies we'd shared I remember the instant clicks of strangers hesitant eyes compensating for words eager to be uttered adorned on shivering lips you'd looked at me with a translucent gaze trying to read between the layers of my mind my hair in the autumn breeze revealed dancing shades of uncertainties on my face. We'd wished to travel parallel universes distant yet conjoined by shared silence. You remember the mystic aura of that magic the love that could have been for us words turned parched, you didn't try, nor did I, we remained at par at unfathomable frequencies, but you never had the courage to ask I never took a step to express rhythms of innocence clouded by realities and we let them fade in silence by turbulent misunderstandings of pain drifting in dark oceans on desolate boats we crossed paths clashing our oars of anguish dissolving bridges that could have been preserved you chose to destroy our utopia in vain hurling me in a fiery whirlpool of tears; I floated in blame games to find my shore parallel waves superimposed, inseparable, never meant to be merged by echoes of interference, but now that I turn from my blessed world I wonder who it was that got away was it you or was it me you breathe, I whisper, inaudible words float our deaf love gasping beneath the grave the love that could've been shouldn't have been as I emerged to a dawn of awakening I've known I'm glad that I got away July 7, 2020 The One that got Away Poetry Contest Sponsor: Silent One ~Winner: 2nd Place

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Date: 7/10/2020 4:05:00 PM
Congratulations on such a wonderful write and the prize.
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/11/2020 8:00:00 AM
Thank you for such gracious appreciation Caren :)
Date: 7/8/2020 11:05:00 AM
Every time you write like a pro.... Beautiful journey of deep emotions. "the heart has it's reasons of which reasons known nothing. "
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Date: 7/8/2020 11:40:00 AM
Your gracious comment made my day Aditi. Thank you for your visit and kind appreciation :)
Date: 7/8/2020 3:22:00 AM
Awesome writing Aditi...and congrats dear friend...best wishes & hugs...^WW^ :o)
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/8/2020 6:38:00 AM
Thank you for your kind wishes and appreciation dear friend. Blessings and hugs :)
Date: 7/7/2020 9:00:00 PM
You always write beautifully and intimately and fill your pen with stardust, glitter and images of rainbows. I always adore your words and the way you express your heart and soul. Much love and blessings sent your way. And, CONGRATS!!!
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Date: 7/8/2020 1:30:00 AM
I am honored by your visits and kind appreciation Gina. You always shower me with generous encouragement. Thank you for being a guiding light here. Blessings and love :)
Date: 7/7/2020 8:28:00 PM
Congratulations, Aditi, it’s a great poem with touching images!
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Date: 7/8/2020 1:29:00 AM
Thank you for such a beautiful comment my dear :)
Date: 7/7/2020 6:37:00 PM
I ran out of space last time, but wanted to say it was all wonderful, as are all your poems, and congratulations for your win. ~ John
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Date: 7/8/2020 1:29:00 AM
I am glad you love my words John. Your visits and thoughts always hold a special place in my book. Thank you so much for the abundant grace. Blessings :)
Date: 7/7/2020 6:36:00 PM
Oh, thank you for taking us with you on this journey, Aditi. The trajectory begins with such romantic hopes, morphs into a sadness that only love can create, and resolves into a satisfaction that all is well and has happened according to a greater plan. Too many favorite lines to mention, but two I loved are "dancing shades of uncertainties on my face" and " I floated in blame games to find my shore". Enjoyed the scientific side that comes out with interfering waves and unfathomable frequencies.
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Date: 7/8/2020 1:28:00 AM
Really happy to see you taking a deep dive into my words and procuring lessons from dark depths my friend. This is why I value your thoughtful words. You have the ability to turn the mundane into magic with your minute observations and empathy. I am ready pleased to share my words with a gem like you. :)
Date: 7/7/2020 5:57:00 PM
A soul who recognises the awareness of the Self on the journey of love.. A soul who has not lost her senses to love.. Rising in beauty, still other journeys to ride.. the soul has to reach fulfilment and bliss.. great is your rendition of the love "that shouldn't have been".. so much pleased to read your wonderful poetry! Congratulations on your great placement, Aditi! Well earned! My deepest regards and blessings.
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Date: 7/8/2020 1:26:00 AM
I am honored by your visit and such thoughtful appreciation dear Besma. Thank you for your gracious encouragement. I am glad we love so much on our journeys to share with each other. Blessings and much love :)
Date: 7/7/2020 5:57:00 PM
Love it Aditi!
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/8/2020 1:25:00 AM
Thank you James :)
Date: 7/7/2020 5:31:00 PM
Congrats my friend on your podium win in Silent's contest. Absolutely well deserved.
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Date: 7/8/2020 1:25:00 AM
Thank you for your kind appreciation Vijay. Your warm wishes mean a lot.
Date: 7/7/2020 11:08:00 AM
So much depth of emotions in your lines, Aditi. You have expressed the pain and heartbreak with vivid imagery. Some loves are not meant to be and are best left in the past. Congrats...Rhonda :) xx
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Date: 7/7/2020 3:36:00 PM
I am glad you love my muse Rhonda. You've concluded it honestly. Thank you for your visit and gracious appreciation. Much love :)
Date: 7/7/2020 9:51:00 AM
I pray you will never know deaf love, for when love is true, it sings in your ear, beautiful poetry, strung together more precious then pearls in the sea, Love and hugs xo
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Date: 7/7/2020 10:12:00 AM
Thank you for such kind wishes :) I am glad after this I got to experience the kind of love that makes way quietly and blooms in the simplest melodies. Blessings and love :)
Date: 7/7/2020 9:25:00 AM
Seems like you were the one that got away and not him... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 7/7/2020 10:11:00 AM
I'd say at different points one of us tried to get away and the other tried to stay. Glad we did. Thank you for my placement in your contest :)

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