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Was It Something I Said

Your no use to me I told you so you irritate and annoy me but where will you go? your a nasty quarrelsome type I know what you are and I'm always right and by the way your sexless in bed dont know whats going on in your head! I've shouted at you I know it's true cant you see what you do to me, just be quiet and dont be cold and I might let you keep that band of gold!.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/17/2010 1:16:00 PM
Sounds like a stern warning to some one.....Sound like you are getting short change. Love Roger x
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Date: 2/10/2010 8:05:00 PM
Grand words, but between the lines, I read pain.... and thanks for your comments on my poetry
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Date: 12/8/2009 6:35:00 AM
Well, in spite of bed problems, a person must have a friend in his/her mate. Sounds like this person has neither. Good write.Thanks for reading my stuff. Love, daver
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Date: 12/7/2009 1:17:00 PM
Good poem, the 2 of mine you left comments on I wrote many years ago when I was in a bad place. I'm now with the most beautiful woman in the world who I love with all my heart and she loves me more than I have ever been loved.
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